the story is "meh" but i LOL'd at the typo in the description...
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Anonymous10/23/15
As Lurch (from "The Addams Family") would say: ..".uhhhhhhhh..."
Dummy, they live nude, so they are "nude livers", simple...
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Anonymous10/28/15
not bad great premise
but should of been longer and needed a lot more backstory on who's who(maybe my fault not reading previous story)and the Alison story was just weird unless explained in previous story/s
Will go back read previous stuff & update my comment(if needed)
This is a great start to the continuing advenutres and I look forward to the completion of this chapter plus the back story and amalgamation of Alison and her story into the "Give Me A Hand" senario.
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so where are the "nude livers"?
the story is "meh" but i LOL'd at the typo in the description...
As Lurch (from "The Addams Family") would say: ..".uhhhhhhhh..."
Dummy, they live nude, so they are "nude livers", simple...
not bad great premise
but should of been longer and needed a lot more backstory on who's who(maybe my fault not reading previous story)and the Alison story was just weird unless explained in previous story/s
Will go back read previous stuff & update my comment(if needed)
A great start
This is a great start to the continuing advenutres and I look forward to the completion of this chapter plus the back story and amalgamation of Alison and her story into the "Give Me A Hand" senario.
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