Cracking story-telling. Sexy, well written, all round excellent.
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Anonymous10/21/15
Enjoyed
I write short stories and I enjoyed this story, not just the plot , but also your choice of wording. It wasn't just sex; you have an excellent vocabulary and know how to use it.
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Anonymous10/21/15
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waiting for mom to take her own advice, and stay down
Simply wow. That had to be the hottest story I have read in some time. I just looked and saw that you have a bunch of other offerings...I have a lot of reading to catch up on! Thanks...and please...keep writing!
Just wished you had written more about the sex between them. Probably could have focused less on the twinnies and more on the the mom son sex. Having Connor sum just once is really unfair ;)
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Anonymous10/22/15
Arousing and getting hotter ..... Conner needs to take his Mom and screw her hard and slowly - both to savor it and then she can give him a slow bj so they both can have some fun. Cannot wait for more detail as his MILF Mom gets what she really needs and wants as he does too. Thank you.
Excellent story - so damn sexy and erotic. I didn't want it to end. I wish she had fucked the twins too - maybe next time. Hell, I wish she had fucked me!
So well written!! I loved it! The only thing that would have made it better for me was if the mom had bigger titties but as a competitive swimmer, I understand why she didn't.
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Anonymous11/20/16
Great story
This was a great story can't wait to read what happens next between mother and son
Wow!
Cracking story-telling. Sexy, well written, all round excellent.
Enjoyed
I write short stories and I enjoyed this story, not just the plot , but also your choice of wording. It wasn't just sex; you have an excellent vocabulary and know how to use it.
next chapter
waiting for mom to take her own advice, and stay down
Wow.
Simply wow. That had to be the hottest story I have read in some time. I just looked and saw that you have a bunch of other offerings...I have a lot of reading to catch up on! Thanks...and please...keep writing!
Amazing
Great hot story i hope it continues great teasing and the tention is awesome. More please more
Agreed, a cracking story
Just wished you had written more about the sex between them. Probably could have focused less on the twinnies and more on the the mom son sex. Having Connor sum just once is really unfair ;)
Arousing and getting hotter ..... Conner needs to take his Mom and screw her hard and slowly - both to savor it and then she can give him a slow bj so they both can have some fun. Cannot wait for more detail as his MILF Mom gets what she really needs and wants as he does too. Thank you.
Ecellent -- 5 stars
Excellent story - so damn sexy and erotic. I didn't want it to end. I wish she had fucked the twins too - maybe next time. Hell, I wish she had fucked me!
You are my new favorite author!
So slow, so sensual, so perfect dialog.
WHAT !! no GGG breasts and 14" dicks?
l don't know how you are going to get anyone to like your stories
So well written!! I loved it! The only thing that would have made it better for me was if the mom had bigger titties but as a competitive swimmer, I understand why she didn't.
Great story
This was a great story can't wait to read what happens next between mother and son
Well written
A well known written story! Thank you.
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