Losing the House but Winning Mom 04

I didn't think your story could get any hotter . . .

but I was wrong. This has to be one of, if not the hottest, story you have ever written.
Can hardly wait for the next installment. Susan, this story proves without a doubt that you are the best author found on this site.

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Am I reading the same story? Where is the part that's hot? I find myself skipping 3 or 4 paragraphs at a time just because your saying the same thing just in a different way. This is the 4th chapter and they are just taking there clothes off. Your dragging the story out to the point that it's becoming boring. Sorry to be so rough but that's the way I see it....

i guess us reds think alike.i like a slow seduction as much as the next guy but damn.we have been reading for a week and they still have not even touched or admitted to mom wanting to get fucked by her son yet, muchless done it.

This is not a story. It's a novel.

I see your problem. You think that this is a short story. It's not. It's a 60,000 word novel length work.

Tell me, when you watch a program on TV that has several episodes, do you expect to see everything in the first scene? Of course not.

Secondly, here's your other problem. I don't write pornography. I write erotica. The name of this site is not called Literpornography, it's called, Literotica.

Now, if you're looking to read sex without a story, with no character development, with no tension, with no real dialogue, with no description, and with no imagery, go read another writer. Most of the writers here write pornography, sex, sex, and sex. I don't write those types of stories.

Very exciting Susan

I gave you a 5. Wish the son sniffed his mom's panties when he caught it. It would be nice that they will be comfortable naked all the time and the mom would act careless when moving around the room and when they sleep in bed thus showing him her parted pussy lips as if by accident. Or while she lays in bed talking with somebody on the phone, casually spreading her legs and showing her son her parted pussy lips with the clit peeping and winking at him.

Very hot Erotic Read.. :-)

Love your inner and outer person writing. ... good balance in my opinion....
Can't wait to read the next several chapters.........

Well done Susan !

Fantastic ! The sexual tension builds while the mother seems to take charge. Can't wait to see how this develops. Susan somehow I see you standing there looking at all of us with a great big smile on your face knowing that you have reeled us in. Keep up the great job :)