All Comments on 'Spree 3'

Just wanted to type that line in myself, it feels great--you got right to me on this one, such energy and FUN! I loved the sound of the ending and your playful juggling act with words.

Marvelous word play. Well done!

....(paraphrasing) "The best poems are the ones I wish I'd written" I wish.

'Nuff said.

of this piece and of course, the language. If I had to pick a favourite part it would be,

"...sliding

slippery on top of me

scripting a trail

of strawberry flavoured

saliva over still, somehow,

summer tanned skin..."

is excellent, and the rhythm even better..I like your *spree* writing Icingsugar, keep it up ;) maria

Can I have Christmas back? Loved this.