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by demure10110/22/15

Erupting

Into a riot of gold!

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by erectus12310/23/15

well

done riff on an old theme, but compare to a more original riff by Dylan Thomas,
"Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know"

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