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by Anonymous10/22/15

Good story

Good story. I found some spelling errors though and the ending was too abrupt. I believe you should continue the story a little bit longer. Maybe give some information on James and his history. Run this story out a little

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by Anonymous10/23/15

great concept

A good story, a few errors, e.g. it should be duel not dual in line five, detract from the enjoyment.

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by Anonymous10/25/15

Should have been SF-F...

...not erotic horror. But not bad.

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