Entering and Breaking

It was an interesting story until the end.

The only way to end this would be to get a divorce which, considering his hatred for her and her contempt for hubby, should be easily obtained.

It would have been far better to see the aftermath of the rape and destruction of their marriage.


As it was, by making it the standard blackmail video, you made it exactly the same as half the stories on here.

Excellent story

Excellent and realistic story. The author has a proper understanding of the submissiveness of a sissy who has a small penis. It's time for the wife to get a strap on and put her husband in panties.

End not finished

After the man left, hubby should've got up, grabbed the bowling pin and used it on his bitch of a wife. First the wide end in her cunt, then the other end in her ass.
But since he's a sissy now, the surprise ending should've been her sucking and fucking her new lover, and openly inviting him back for a repeat performance with the sissy whenever the big man wanted. Maybe next time bring some friends.

Revenge!

Let the wife slip up, make a mistake, allowing him to get his revenge! Excellent story so far

Wow was that bad!

The minute he drives his fist into him at the start? He loses his knife direction. Stomp on the inside of his ankle, drive your elbow into his throat crushing his larynx, killing him. End of stupidity. Failing that, what special type of fool puts his dick into someones mouth that hates him? The human jaw creates over 2000 lbs of pressure. One bite and his dick is gone. Without immediate medical treatment, he bleeds to death. But the part that made me laugh was the cage? It's a toy you idiot. He walks into the garage, takes a pair of pliers and it's off in 30 seconds. Take the phone straight to the police. How many crooks are stupid enough to send a message that any idiot can trace? Did you bother to proof read this garbage and THINK about what you wrote? This was just plain dumb.

very good

Please continue. The Wife should be forced to turn her husband sissy and see him only in thong, skirt, bra and garter belt. The husband should be feminzed and broken until he accepts his role as the masters sissy and his wife dont recognize him as a man anymore . Make his balls shrink and his dick limp with pills.The Master should force them to live together as a real man, a wife and a sissy.

4 stars

I don't normally like this type of story but I am glad I took the time to read this one. Very well done, captivated the reader and I am looking forward to the next installment.

this should be in the fetish section

Just awful and rated 1*

This story is incomple

While this story offends me on so many levels, it is extremely well thought out. It is also delivered well, and all three characters introduced so far have been portrayed consistently with the little we know about them.
However, NO ONE is this evil without motive. Even the assailant's stated motive--a morbid curiosity at human response to an unwinnable conflict with predetermined results--doesn't provide his reason for destroying this particular couple. So the wife is "gorgeous" and responded to his dominance; but he doesn't really take advantage of her in this installment. So the husband is an amateur jock with a couple trophies lying around who has let himself go a little; does that warrant this degree of humiliation from another amateur jock (who isn't too bright) whose sole purpose for breaking into their home was to demonstrate his superiority? Yes, I know it's fantasy, but without a motive being revealed it is totally unrealistic.
The story cries out for a sequel, but the content is so disgusting that I would probably bomb you if you posted one. 4* due to your craftsmanship but not your content

Yeah Right

Not very realistic. Why didn't the wife call the police when she went back for her bra? Because she was in on it from the start. Husband figures it out and they have a nice little murder suicide to end the nightmare. Where is FTDS to complete this drivel?

He has to

go to the police or else face the blackmail for how long? How many men would be willing to put up with a wife who cooperates. Counseling, maybe--but after the police deal with the attacker.

love it

love it

Best story ever

I wish this happened to me.

Brilliant. Wish I had thought of the concept. You must have had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks

sequel?

Woo! Good story. Will there be a next part? Little sissy's humiliation has only just begun. And it sounds like his wife will become a very strict key holder.

You missed one

You missed out on the best part though! The part where the pathetic moron doing the raping gets caught because he left DNA all over the house, and the guys in prison break him of his pathetic arrogance.

wish it was me

Wish this happened to me. I would have begged him to stay and keep me as his sissy slave.

I wished this happened to me!!!

I want a bowling pin up my ass!!!

Nice work

The dialogue was a lil rough but overall a captivating read. I hope you write a sequel.

jesus

That was hot

Wow

Please continue his sissyfication.

Wow

Unbelievably hot. I loved all the power exchange dialogue. That Alpha character really knew how to degrade the couple. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Incredible

This story is insanely hot and definitely should have a sequel. Would love to be that sissy husband.

Very good

I thank the sissy should get revenge after being fucked some more. to many of these stories end with a broken sissy it's a much hotter ending if the Dom gets broken by a clearly weaker person that has gained control in some way. People who have been tortured are always better at tortureing.

Awesome story

Wow! That story was fantastic. I wish that was me being humiliated like that, especially having my wife watch me give a stranger with a huge cock a blow job. It reminds me of these 2 girls who tie me up face down & spread wide open, they always talk about sticking a wine bottle in me. They will someday. They like to watch when I suck on a guy's cock, especially lick cum off the floor. Then they jerk me off & I lick my cum off the floor.

This is a story for all you Gay Fags!!!!

I bet that most of the comments are from fags....call them what you want..sissy's ..fags...homo's I'll bet they are the ones that liked this piece of shit...Because that what this story was ...shit ..shit ..and more shit. That sissy should grap the key from his wife and fuck her up the ass with the bowling pin and then get the fuck away from her! Say sayonara to her and divorce the cunt... Who gives a fuck if he sends the video to family and friends...Does Stephanie really think that would prevent sissy from exacting revenge. A 45 evens things out real quickly. But let's face it ;... It is a fag piece. Or a Lezzie piece who hates men....am I right Stephanie?