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Awesome!!!!
That was such a great story...You can't just leave it like that...must have more!!!!
GREAT STORY, U.S.!!!
I can't believe that I've overlooked these stories all of these years. There's something about a story of a cheating wife or girlfriend having an interracial affair that turns me on. This is as hot as my story, "Four Can Play This Game". I would like to see a Part 3 to this one, only with no protection used. That is, the lust that they have for each other overpowers them and they end up having sex without protection.
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
You must finish the story! This is so fucking hot...please write more
Hurry up please
Can't wait to see what Ray does for an encore. There's kinky in this story that needs to be explored.
WHAT !!!!
I am shocked .. where is the rest... !!!You just can't leave your readers hanging ... at least not me anyway lol.
And...?
OK, this is just wrong. You have to let us know what happens next. I'm just finding these stories, but they are obviously several years old, so what are you waiting for? As with chapter 1, your story and imagery are great, but you once again have numerous places where a proofreader would have been of enormous help. For instance, there is no such word as "rhythmatically". It's "rhythmically". And once again you just left ou words in places. It's usually easy to figure out what the missing word should have been and fill in the blanks, but it is distracting. That's why I gave it a four instead of a five. With these issues corrected, this would absolutely be a five. It is incredibly hot.
*****
Hurry with the next chapter please :)
DAMN
More please...
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