All Comments on 'Halloween Incognito'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love this!!!

Jus enough back story then straight into the good stuff!!! So f'in hot!!!! 10/10

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So dam hot

Great story! So dam hot :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The essence of simplicity

That was a masterful display of authorship. I was happily misled, who was she fucking? Could she be fucking her brother? The simple hint of doubt was always present, until I read his name. No trick but a delightfully well written treat. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sexy Levi

Levi is a very mature young man -- as Jess traces her fingers over his chest, I hope she's running her fingertips through sexy hair on his sexy chest!

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 8 years ago
10/10 not bad for a beginner....

For someone who has just stated writing on this site your two stories so far, with me anyway 10 / 10 .. 5 stars for A Taboo Christmas and 5 stars for this effort. Well done

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