by sagarforsex
I could really get a sense for the situations and feelings of the characters. Granted the English was not perfect, but even the errors gave a sort of flavor to it being set in India and that the characters are not European/American. Great job! Thank you for taking the time and energy to write such a real, raw and well-spun tale.
loved it..wish it had happened wit me exactly like that...mine was more rough and with a stranger
Beautiful. The next part of the uncle in the theatre please. Can’t wait to read your story