Wonderful story and the thoughts of each. Will written, slow and steady. Please keep writing.
Love how you capture the usually semi-articulated thoughts of taboo sex Susan. You're master of the genre.
It's as if you can hear his thoughts,see him in his quandary. The naked desire pulling him yet unable to take that leap. Susan, are you the mother calling us out on our own thoughts ? :)
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Wonderful story and the thoughts of each. Will written, slow and steady. Please keep writing.
The inner life
Love how you capture the usually semi-articulated thoughts of taboo sex Susan. You're master of the genre.
Well done Susan.
It's as if you can hear his thoughts,see him in his quandary. The naked desire pulling him yet unable to take that leap. Susan, are you the mother calling us out on our own thoughts ? :)
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