great story with many good possibilities !! Please keep writing and hopefully his step-mom will teach him other things and will keep him de-stressed. Great way to start their interaction ....... Now that she has showed him her breasts; she might show and do other things to him......... very arousing. Thank you !!
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Anonymous10/30/15
Sexy
As step-mom gives him a shower-bath, perhaps she can run her fingertips through his chest hair -- he seems a very mature, well-developed, sexy young man!
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Anonymous10/30/15
Close but not Quite
It's a Good story, but why did she have to be the Step mother rather than the mother? Maybe it's true, maybe not. It's "Taboo", just not true "Incest"... That would be a GREAT story.
This is my first writing and yes, things will progress. I understand how you would say this isn't true incest but give it some time and see where it goes.
Writing on real experiences and I think many of you will like future chapters. 👍😏
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Anonymous10/31/15
alright.
It was ok. 2/5
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Anonymous11/02/15
Me
I wish that was me and I cummed in her mouth.Then the next morning I would of said That I owe you. A thank you.So let me lick your ass real good until you have a good orgasm.
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Anonymous01/07/16
Where's the rest of it?
This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. It ended way too soon. What happened the next morning? He did have a concussion. Was he still woozy the next morning? Did he need help getting ready for bed or getting dressed the next morning? Please continue this fucking hot story. Just don't make it one page essays.
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She was ten years older than me at the time and while she wasn't the hottest woman out there she had ample breasts, a nice ass, and a decent figure. She was about 5'4" and probably around 140 or so, so not bad
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Thats pretty chunky on a 5'4" frame, lol. My wife is 5'7" and Ive seen her at 140 and its overly large on the ass and thighs! :/
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found out later I actually had a concussion as well but back then they didn't really focus on that much
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Really?! Rofl.
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"Get dried off and dressed so you can get to bed." she said as she walked out of the bathroom.
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Rofl, yeah, thats it! The guy collapses in the shower, having trouble even standing and you blow him and just walk off, leaving him in an even more weakened state so he can fall and split his head open, rofl!!! Nice mom! Lol.
English
Keep Writing***
We need some new writer with new story line this is a good start!!!
Great first chapter
Now you need to develope this story to further episodes starting with when he awakes next day
more
its very good keep it up
great story with many good possibilities !! Please keep writing and hopefully his step-mom will teach him other things and will keep him de-stressed. Great way to start their interaction ....... Now that she has showed him her breasts; she might show and do other things to him......... very arousing. Thank you !!
Sexy
As step-mom gives him a shower-bath, perhaps she can run her fingertips through his chest hair -- he seems a very mature, well-developed, sexy young man!
Close but not Quite
It's a Good story, but why did she have to be the Step mother rather than the mother? Maybe it's true, maybe not. It's "Taboo", just not true "Incest"... That would be a GREAT story.
Thank you everyone
This is my first writing and yes, things will progress. I understand how you would say this isn't true incest but give it some time and see where it goes.
Writing on real experiences and I think many of you will like future chapters. 👍😏
alright.
It was ok. 2/5
Me
I wish that was me and I cummed in her mouth.Then the next morning I would of said That I owe you. A thank you.So let me lick your ass real good until you have a good orgasm.
Where's the rest of it?
This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. It ended way too soon. What happened the next morning? He did have a concussion. Was he still woozy the next morning? Did he need help getting ready for bed or getting dressed the next morning? Please continue this fucking hot story. Just don't make it one page essays.
""
She was ten years older than me at the time and while she wasn't the hottest woman out there she had ample breasts, a nice ass, and a decent figure. She was about 5'4" and probably around 140 or so, so not bad
""
Thats pretty chunky on a 5'4" frame, lol. My wife is 5'7" and Ive seen her at 140 and its overly large on the ass and thighs! :/
""
found out later I actually had a concussion as well but back then they didn't really focus on that much
""
Really?! Rofl.
""
"Get dried off and dressed so you can get to bed." she said as she walked out of the bathroom.
""
Rofl, yeah, thats it! The guy collapses in the shower, having trouble even standing and you blow him and just walk off, leaving him in an even more weakened state so he can fall and split his head open, rofl!!! Nice mom! Lol.
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