All Comments on 'August 2000 Ch. 03'

I am beside myself with excitement... and await the next installment. Please hurry

The first two chapters show great writting ablity and this one is no different. I can not wait to read the next chapter, for I am sure it will keep with the patteren and be the best so far like this one is now.

I love your writing! The pace is just right -- single vignettes, lots of unknowns -- where will the story go next? The anticipation is great, when I see a new chapter has been posted, I feel a tantalizing excitement -- will this be the chapter when (whatever) happens?