Look forward to d night at Jupiter Inn and how the couple enjoy the exp. There was Daphne's confusion, love and anticipation in your story.Hope we see more of domination with love blended within. Lots of scope to take this story to different threads.....
Good start..!!
Look forward to d night at Jupiter Inn and how the couple enjoy the exp. There was Daphne's confusion, love and anticipation in your story.Hope we see more of domination with love blended within. Lots of scope to take this story to different threads.....
Way too short...!!
Just to add it could have been a 2 pager story.. Its way too short... Liked d piece though..
I stopped reading ...
at "... they're anniversary"
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