All Comments on 'Sis in Bed'

i really like ur submission.

loved the licking of tears!

though i love the story but does it happen really in society like pakistan

Unfortunately lot of new writers from Indo Pak community try to write Incest stories and within one story put every thinglike ass fucking,cock licking,etc etc,items which do not happen in first time sex between brother and sister. This is not a true story. Writer is confused. His other story" getting in my sisters panties" also lacks reality.Incest in those countries is not common and if it happens no participant write about it.

I agree with professor. I belong to this region too and the way writer have described the things happening is not the way things happen here specially incest.

A poor writing; unrealistic, and obviously written by a horny virgin with no experience of actual sex, incestuous or otherwise. And no, jacking off to pornos does not count.

Not well written and very unrealistic

This isn't hot this is disgusting, so die and apologize to your sister

Woo