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First rate erotica and writing!
Goodgawdalmighty, what a real "pleasure of the text". It is an inspiring fantasy, more for my sex I believe. Loved the language, sentences, phrases as only a literary maven can, but also the images generated in my mind's lascivious eye. Write more like this, por favor. Perdita
Swift would be proud
I think you've done an excellent job of capturing the language and tone of Mr. Swift. And the end of the chapter is as natural and satisfying as it could possibly be. Let us see chapter 2 as soon as you can.
Extraordinary
Ogs, you have outdone yourself. Truely a tour de force!
Excellent!!!
Ditto to Perditas, ffreaks, and Colleen Thomass remarks, looking forward to Chapter 2. Lady Lay
My appologies!!
I'm not sure what happened to my vote, I rated it 100 but it came up 50, I hope this over rides the other vote Og, your story was delightful. Lady Lay
Amazing
That was amazing. It was funny AND erotic, and seemed to copy the actual efforts of J. Swift. I am also looking forward to Chapter the Second.
Jumping on the Bandwagon...
Excellent! Very credible sounding--Ogg has the style of Swift down very well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Delightful!
I felt as if I was reading the actual tale (just improved with a bit more lustful adventures).
Well done! More, please!
That was swell!
Totally engorging!
Extraordinary
The writing is excellent and captures Swift very well. Indeed, I would have paid more attention in class so many years ago, if this chapter had been included.
Give us more!
Ingenious
Well done venerable Ogg. An ingenious addition to Gulliver worthy of an entire compendium. Many thanks.
Will's
Eloquently done
Ogg,
Delightfully written with a wonderful capture of Swift's tone. I echo the previous readers' enthusiastic comments and am anxiously awaiting Chapter the Second.
OnD
Most excellent
Once again, the great Ogg delivers. This is truly a tour de force - and it comes powerfully close to surpassing the master.
Mighty images from diminutive stature come
Og,
there is little this poor scribe can add to the praise already laid upon this work, yet must I say, "Well done."
Alex
Excellent
Well done Ogg, thoroughly enjoyed the tale. Keep it up!
A excellent little read...
I've read a few attempts to expand on Gulliver's Travels, a couple of them focusing on Brobdingnag or Glumdalclitch. This one balances the erotica with the style better than any of them. I'm going to have to check out your other work now... :)
-- Grildrig
great!
gr8 work! really, ok ok.. you knew that by now, but its really really nice!
Keen Historical Account
This adventure is immensely satisfying from a scientific standpoint and so it baffles me that some readers vote less than five stars. (though I wouldn't be completely shocked if those people had a Yahoo or two lurking in the family tree)
Wow
True fantasy!
And there are 5 more to go
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