- All
Comments (9) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
great story
great story,really enjoyed reading it,kidnap,rape,blindfolds and bondage. excellent.
Miss Shy's initiation
What a wonderful story, there's a real feel to the shyness which has an erotic and exciting feel to it....it resulted in one hell of a hard on...cant wait to read/ hear more xxx
Hot Hot Hot
Hi Miss_Shy_Newcastle,
That was one hell of a story, you have a real talent for writing, keep it up (you do me)
Great story
Great story, very sexy, a real turn on
I'l get you next time gadget!!!
Well im sitting here, pants down...cock out and all i can say is NOT A TWITCH!!! Im most disappointed with this story. This is enough to make concrete go floppy, it looks like im going to have to take a trip to the valleys of wales again this weekend as there is a sheep there with my name on it PREPARE THE VELCRO GLOVES AND BIG WELLIES!!
Disregard the sheep lover (wink) he's ba a a ad...
Excellent writing MSN, kept me on edge til the last word and wanting more, more, more!
Hoping for a continuaton or second story from you soon!
very sexy but...
I thought this one was very sexy, but I wish you'd develop the story more. you have some great characters and setting but the plot leaves too much out. Would love to see a sequal though.
~*~daisy~*~
Potentially fantastic
The only reason I gave 3 out of 5 is because I think it should have been longer with more of what you seem so good at writing! The story should have been at least double the length and in this case I think 5/5 would have been the result. I think you have thought out the characters and scenario very well so developing them further would give the reader so much more pleasure. I really got into the story, feeling I was there, the control, the pain and the pleasure, but then it finished a bit soon. I look forward to more of your work, I'm sure it'll be fantastic!!
A good start.............
'Could use more development. 'Work more detail and description into it.....U want ur reader to feel the excitement.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to My Initiation or
More submissions by Miss_Shy_Newcastle.