When I got to the bottom of the first page and saw how many pages there were, I thought - no way. I figured I would get bored before I could finish. But it held my interest throughout. A very erotic and well written story. Thanks.
This story was amazing. I saw the length and told myself I would stop halfway through, but when I got to that point, I just couldn't turn away. I would love to see more of this story.
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Anonymous01/12/04
Great Read
until i got to the bottom of the first page, I didn't realise how long the story was. But it was great! not once did I get bored...some VERY hot scenes!
thanks erin for a wonderful story. you don't get many stories with great leangth and keeping it exciting. Hope to read many more from you....
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Anonymous01/12/04
great story, but I sure wish it was broken up
Man, what a great story. Never got bored but I sure wish you could have broken it up into chapters. My secretary is wondering what I have done all afternoon. Oops!
I've read alot of your stuff, and it is all amazing, but this just makes the rest look ... well not that good. I really hope you carry it on :) another 15 pages ;)
It's taken us 3 days to read this story! something kept coming up. It just makes you so horny? read quite alot of Tryanything's stories. They are amongst the best on litroc. this was the great. thanks and keep them coming???
by
Anonymous01/20/04
Damn Good Read
Love all of tryanything's stuff, masterful writing on great subjects. More More More is what I and everyone who read this wants. Truly good stuff.
by
Anonymous01/21/04
Erin Is A Nice Girl
I just hope Erin doesn't lose her faith. I hope she still prays before meals and at bedtime, goes to church, and is kind to the collection plate and lights candles for people who need help. I also hope she becomes a genuine close friend to Tasha and Brian and other people, not just a sex partner. The porn industry is full of "use 'em up" scenarios where women, in particular, have sex until they lose their looks, then get dumped. There have been a few suicides and many drug addictions from the industry (this is also true of mainstream). I hope Erin can go to confession without being condemned by the priest.
by
Anonymous01/22/04
One of the best!
Fantastic! Fantastic! Fantastic!
by
Anonymous01/23/04
Awesome!!!!!
Can't wait for the next installment. This is a MUST read.
Well, I just spent a very pleasurable hour and a half reading about Erin and her exploits. Hugely entertaining - wow, just wow. I am so relaxed, I can barely string the words together to say how relaxed I am. TryAnything, you are truly a master craftsman. Don't ever stop writing!
by
Anonymous02/11/04
So Coool
I'm glad you're back. I've been waiting forever since i first started reading your submissions. They're great
I'll never get any work done!!! everything superb, but was slightly disapointed with how Erin finally lost her virginity.... and not filmed as had been suggested...
Thats the way you write a story. I loved all the details in the story please keep them coming.
by
04/21/04
Well Damn.
I have read some long stories on Lit but this simply takes the cake. Absolutely delicious. I love incest stories and I thought I was a decent author until I read your story. Good gracious sakes alive. Thank you for writing, thank you for submitting. I guess I really need to go back to the drawing board if this is one of the top 20 incest stories on Lit. Always, E
I would count this among my top five favorite stories on Literotica. Absolutely wonderful! When I saw how long it was, I figured I had two options: either several orgasms as I read the story, or a long buildup and then a big one. I went the latter route and I was not disappointed, as there were numerous hot scenes throughout! This story kept me on the edge the whole time and I'm still buzzing. Thank you so much for a fantastic story, and I hope you'll produce such stunning work again.
by
Anonymous09/02/04
HOLY SHIT
I have been reading this for a week now on my lunch breaks at work.. This could easily be a full book or the best porno movie ever.. You have adapted an entire package. A killer story line, seduction, incest, lesbian, and inner struggle.. You are the most talented story writer I have ever seen.. If you come up with any more chapters to this story please let me know..
Jimijaymez@yahoo.com
by
Anonymous09/09/04
Wow
Tryanything, i've read several of your stories and it has gotten to the point where if i see your name, i read it just because i know it will be an awesome story. your an amazing writer. please please keep writing.
by
Anonymous09/18/04
Absolutly Amazing
I have been reading literotica stories for quite some time now, and by far i have to say your story has been the most cogent, most impressive (and longest) story i have read.
you have a brilliant imaginatation and some serious writing talent, congratulations on writing an absolutly brilliant erotic story
I sent this to my girlfriend, and i know she will love it too, i cant wait to read some of your other works. This is a definate 5 on my books
Ihave just finished reading several of you erotic shorts and I throughly enjoyed the quality of the sex and the the hot erotocism that came boiling out of the story. Please Keep up the the fantastic work/ this is the first time since being on the internet in eight years that I have ever responded to an Auther much less a web site but I feelconstrained to do so.
by
Anonymous11/29/04
Good, but.
Well, since all the comments have been nothing but raving
so far, I think I'll throw in a bit of criticism. This is
not to say I didn't like the story, I found it quite
entertaining, but the plot structure lacks
coherence somewhat. Some of the scenes were repetitive (go
to the beach, have Brad come by and apply the lotion, over
and over again), and others seemed not to go anywhere.
Also, the characters could have been less superhuman. Not
everyone needs to have voluptous breasts or an ever-erect
cock. I know, this is fantasy, but I like mine with a
little more believability. Just a personal preference. Your
writing style, on the other hand, is nice, and you handled
your scenes quite well, if a little shallowly, when it
comes to female characters. I did notice a couple of
stylistical glitches, but they were rather few and far
between. Overall, good work, but not excellent!
I usually don't read real long stories, but the story grabbed my attention RIGHT OFF. It got kind of repetitive and wasn't very realistic, but damn did it get me hot!
The ending was kind of abrupt however. I would of recommended posting it as several smaller stories...
BUT i can't wait to see what her first movie (if she makes one) is going to be like!
I started reading this at about 10 and I just finished at 12:44. I am impressed and have added you to my favorite authors list. Makes me want to write again! I really loved both Tasha and Erin. Keep up the good work!!
I found this story and just wanted to add my 2 cents. I agree with another who said this is one of the best five stories I have read on this site. The sex was hot, and the storyline flowed. I will read more of your stuff.
Jacqui
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Anonymous04/28/05
OMG!!!
OMG I loved this story i wish i could give it a 20 it was perfect even though it was long i couldnt stop reading it i loved it. I think you should makae another one where she get in the bussniess. that would be cool.
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Anonymous04/28/05
Great Story!!
I am so far behind in work today because I couldn't stop reading the stories. I finished all 15 and feel like Erin did after leaving the booth!!!!
by
Anonymous05/23/05
Damn, now that was hot!
Damn, that was awesome. As a lot of people before me i coulndt stop myself from reading until the end. Wondefull story, i hope your other ones are like this...
by
Anonymous06/11/05
Just couldn't stop
I really loved reading this story. It took a while to read just because of how long it is, but it was well worth my time. I couldn't stop reading, I was so caught up in Erin's escapades. I hope to read more about her.
Fabulous story! Beautiful imagery, lots of cunnilingus, and sex for sex's sake. Also, your grammar and spelling are practically perfect; very important but oft-neglected aspects of any kind of writing.
all i can say is wow!! that was one of the hottest stories i ever read. i must say it kept me wet the whole time very good and i hope to see more bravo!!!!
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Anonymous07/01/05
Best story i have ever read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been through alot of stories on here .. most good but not all ... BUT OMG i could NOT stop reading this story.. i must have MORE ... i truly hope u are going to add more !!!!!! ~K~
English
Thanks
When I got to the bottom of the first page and saw how many pages there were, I thought - no way. I figured I would get bored before I could finish. But it held my interest throughout. A very erotic and well written story. Thanks.
Wow... just wow...
This story was amazing. I saw the length and told myself I would stop halfway through, but when I got to that point, I just couldn't turn away. I would love to see more of this story.
Great Read
until i got to the bottom of the first page, I didn't realise how long the story was. But it was great! not once did I get bored...some VERY hot scenes!
great story
thanks erin for a wonderful story. you don't get many stories with great leangth and keeping it exciting. Hope to read many more from you....
great story, but I sure wish it was broken up
Man, what a great story. Never got bored but I sure wish you could have broken it up into chapters. My secretary is wondering what I have done all afternoon. Oops!
THE MOST EXCELLENT
I LOVE A LOT THIS STORY. KEEP IT UP.
NAVAID
gret
as with all your worksit was outstanding
EXCELLENT!
Perfection! Great read!
Sexmate
Erin
Bloody marvellous!
What a great story
I loved the story. I hope that there is more!
a very good story never read one like it
i look forward in hopes of more of this story your work is excellent
Amazing!
Absolutly amazing. Your writting is good and I love the subject. Please write more with this same group of people. I'd like to see her fuck Brad...
Wow
This is definitely my favorite Literotica story. Wore myself out reading it!
WOW
WOW, I hope that you will continue this story soon. I could not stop reading it till I was finished. Thanks
Amazing
This was awesome! I have been wasting my 5's on other stories when this is really a step above. Where is the 6? Wow!
The Best!!
I've read alot of your stuff, and it is all amazing, but this just makes the rest look ... well not that good. I really hope you carry it on :) another 15 pages ;)
OH GOD! THAT WAS AWESOME...
It's taken us 3 days to read this story! something kept coming up. It just makes you so horny? read quite alot of Tryanything's stories. They are amongst the best on litroc. this was the great. thanks and keep them coming???
Damn Good Read
Love all of tryanything's stuff, masterful writing on great subjects. More More More is what I and everyone who read this wants. Truly good stuff.
Erin Is A Nice Girl
I just hope Erin doesn't lose her faith. I hope she still prays before meals and at bedtime, goes to church, and is kind to the collection plate and lights candles for people who need help. I also hope she becomes a genuine close friend to Tasha and Brian and other people, not just a sex partner. The porn industry is full of "use 'em up" scenarios where women, in particular, have sex until they lose their looks, then get dumped. There have been a few suicides and many drug addictions from the industry (this is also true of mainstream). I hope Erin can go to confession without being condemned by the priest.
One of the best!
Fantastic! Fantastic! Fantastic!
Awesome!!!!!
Can't wait for the next installment. This is a MUST read.
Just Wonderful
Excellent story! Keep up the awesome work!
Good shit....
Keep doin what u doin cuz u doin it well...again GOOD SHIT!
WOW!!!
I've read all your stories and they just keep getting better and better. I love the detail. Keep it (US) up.
Holy Cow!
Well, I just spent a very pleasurable hour and a half reading about Erin and her exploits. Hugely entertaining - wow, just wow. I am so relaxed, I can barely string the words together to say how relaxed I am. TryAnything, you are truly a master craftsman. Don't ever stop writing!
So Coool
I'm glad you're back. I've been waiting forever since i first started reading your submissions. They're great
HEY YA
Holy Shit This was Awesome
Long but WELL worth it.
Great story. Read it in stages but well worth it. Thnaks for taking the time to write it.
Another Great One!!
I'll never get any work done!!! everything superb, but was slightly disapointed with how Erin finally lost her virginity.... and not filmed as had been suggested...
YEA
Thats the way you write a story. I loved all the details in the story please keep them coming.
Well Damn.
I have read some long stories on Lit but this simply takes the cake. Absolutely delicious. I love incest stories and I thought I was a decent author until I read your story. Good gracious sakes alive. Thank you for writing, thank you for submitting. I guess I really need to go back to the drawing board if this is one of the top 20 incest stories on Lit. Always, E
Best yet
man that was the best i've read yet. Keep going.
One of the best
I would count this among my top five favorite stories on Literotica. Absolutely wonderful! When I saw how long it was, I figured I had two options: either several orgasms as I read the story, or a long buildup and then a big one. I went the latter route and I was not disappointed, as there were numerous hot scenes throughout! This story kept me on the edge the whole time and I'm still buzzing. Thank you so much for a fantastic story, and I hope you'll produce such stunning work again.
HOLY SHIT
I have been reading this for a week now on my lunch breaks at work.. This could easily be a full book or the best porno movie ever.. You have adapted an entire package. A killer story line, seduction, incest, lesbian, and inner struggle.. You are the most talented story writer I have ever seen.. If you come up with any more chapters to this story please let me know..
Jimijaymez@yahoo.com
Wow
Tryanything, i've read several of your stories and it has gotten to the point where if i see your name, i read it just because i know it will be an awesome story. your an amazing writer. please please keep writing.
Absolutly Amazing
I have been reading literotica stories for quite some time now, and by far i have to say your story has been the most cogent, most impressive (and longest) story i have read.
you have a brilliant imaginatation and some serious writing talent, congratulations on writing an absolutly brilliant erotic story
I sent this to my girlfriend, and i know she will love it too, i cant wait to read some of your other works. This is a definate 5 on my books
One Hot Short Story/Novella!!!
Ihave just finished reading several of you erotic shorts and I throughly enjoyed the quality of the sex and the the hot erotocism that came boiling out of the story. Please Keep up the the fantastic work/ this is the first time since being on the internet in eight years that I have ever responded to an Auther much less a web site but I feelconstrained to do so.
Good, but.
Well, since all the comments have been nothing but raving
so far, I think I'll throw in a bit of criticism. This is
not to say I didn't like the story, I found it quite
entertaining, but the plot structure lacks
coherence somewhat. Some of the scenes were repetitive (go
to the beach, have Brad come by and apply the lotion, over
and over again), and others seemed not to go anywhere.
Also, the characters could have been less superhuman. Not
everyone needs to have voluptous breasts or an ever-erect
cock. I know, this is fantasy, but I like mine with a
little more believability. Just a personal preference. Your
writing style, on the other hand, is nice, and you handled
your scenes quite well, if a little shallowly, when it
comes to female characters. I did notice a couple of
stylistical glitches, but they were rather few and far
between. Overall, good work, but not excellent!
Great Story... butt....
I usually don't read real long stories, but the story grabbed my attention RIGHT OFF. It got kind of repetitive and wasn't very realistic, but damn did it get me hot!
The ending was kind of abrupt however. I would of recommended posting it as several smaller stories...
BUT i can't wait to see what her first movie (if she makes one) is going to be like!
One Sitting
I started reading this at about 10 and I just finished at 12:44. I am impressed and have added you to my favorite authors list. Makes me want to write again! I really loved both Tasha and Erin. Keep up the good work!!
Thanks for another great story!
I've enjoyed your stories and this is no exception. The only criticism I could offer is that "Jamaal" usually uses two a's in his name.
Roadie
ponderous
Good,very good, not great lit. It was way too long. The ending was too predictable. That said, it was great wanking off material.
bgp
Wonderful
I found this story and just wanted to add my 2 cents. I agree with another who said this is one of the best five stories I have read on this site. The sex was hot, and the storyline flowed. I will read more of your stuff.
Jacqui
OMG!!!
OMG I loved this story i wish i could give it a 20 it was perfect even though it was long i couldnt stop reading it i loved it. I think you should makae another one where she get in the bussniess. that would be cool.
Great Story!!
I am so far behind in work today because I couldn't stop reading the stories. I finished all 15 and feel like Erin did after leaving the booth!!!!
Damn, now that was hot!
Damn, that was awesome. As a lot of people before me i coulndt stop myself from reading until the end. Wondefull story, i hope your other ones are like this...
Just couldn't stop
I really loved reading this story. It took a while to read just because of how long it is, but it was well worth my time. I couldn't stop reading, I was so caught up in Erin's escapades. I hope to read more about her.
Wonderful!
Fabulous story! Beautiful imagery, lots of cunnilingus, and sex for sex's sake. Also, your grammar and spelling are practically perfect; very important but oft-neglected aspects of any kind of writing.
that was awesome
all i can say is wow!! that was one of the hottest stories i ever read. i must say it kept me wet the whole time very good and i hope to see more bravo!!!!
Best story i have ever read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been through alot of stories on here .. most good but not all ... BUT OMG i could NOT stop reading this story.. i must have MORE ... i truly hope u are going to add more !!!!!! ~K~
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