My Fetish Made Me a Cuckold Ch. 02

virgins writers still write great story and this one is a great story

so put your :"" around your ass hole drear anony and bed over

Get an editor

And then think about what you're writing. Unless they kill him and bury the body, they're going to jail. They've drugged him illegally. Did they go down to K-mart and buy the drugs? How did they know what drug to give him and whether or not he might have a bad reaction to the drug or the dosage and die? Then they kidnapped him by binding him to the bed. The assault, battery, sexual assault and other crimes followed. He has ligature marks on his wrists and ankles. So when the cops arrest them, they're toast. And one of them will roll over and testify against the others in lieu of a lighter sentence. At least when he files for divorce he'll get to keep all the marital assets wince his wife will be in prison, convicted of a felony. No other ending is possible. Poorly conceived, badly written drivel. 1 star.

was interested from chapter 1...... but now.... UGH... bleh... just another humiliate the husband who has NO BALLS whatsoever story......i repreat....BLEH
i would've given more then 1 if it'd been ATLEAST consensual ........but,,,

Ha!

That's what he gets for cheating! Hope he ends up locked in chastity cleaning both girls up after Tim!! Nice series, screw the nonnies!

quotation marks

the previous comment is accurate - much easier to read story where the dialogue is properly framed - there is an author help section on the menu page to explain

cell pics

My cell is locked so watever pics i put in my girlfriend can't see them unless i show her this chump had his pics seen by his coworker and his wife not believable!

Turn around!

The beggining of this story was fairly original and very sexy, i understand that it has forced bi. But it turned into another rape the husband, overly willing bull, crapy cuckold story. Dont do that. You are better than that.

Why ?????

Why did you write this damn story and then not finish it ? Author wanna-be's like you piss me off. your lack of concern towards the people who will be reading this story will find that they wasted their time doing so. You, on the other hand, wasted your time writing this shit. do everyone a favor and FINISH THIS DAMN STORY. Don't do like the other suppose to be authors and leave it up to someone else to finish your work. I mean shit, you actually had a pretty good story going-on. Don't be so damn pathetic. As it is I give it 3 stars and hope you do finish this. While I'm at it what gave the poor guys wife any right to let Tim fuck her ? especially since her husband NEVER fucked Tim's woman. If I were him as soon as I was untied I would get dressed and got ready to leave and inform my so-called wife that I was going home and she could live with good ole Tim and his girlfriend. And to expect the divorce papers in the next few days and ask if fucking good ole Tim was worth it.