there must be more of this tale of debauchery and seduction inside your perverted brain.. Get back to your keyboard and let your fingers keep typing. You owe it to all your readers who sit panting, dripping and wanting more.. Thank you in advance for your words so far.... PS.. I think I love you..!
It was good right up to the point of other people getting involved especially her dad. Why can't some of you writers write a good story of siblings being together yes there is going to be times when they will find it hard but if it is love between them it will survive if its just lust then know doubt it will crash and they will end up not talking or see each other for a very long time.
this series has been so HOT!! when is the next chapter cumming? soon please
by
Anonymous04/04/16
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was soooooo great up until this chapter. The dad absolutely ruined it
by
Anonymous06/23/16
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about Dad joining in at this point... sorta stretching my suspension of disbelief, but still hot....... either way, I hope you keep adding to this series. Can't just leave it there.
Nikki you have the most disgusting, perverted, filthy, crude and dirty imagination and
I fucking love it. What would be the point of writing a story about incest between a brother and sister if they were the only two people involved. It would get pretty boring very quickly if it was just the two of them constantly fucking, as there are only so many positions and holes for them to go at. But, introduce other ingredients into the mix and you very quickly get a story that can be kept interesting and keeps the reader guessing as to what will happen next.
I have read a lot of your work recently and in my opinion you are one of the best writers of erotic stories on this site. I fail to understand a lot of the criticism you receive from members of this site. If they want perfect grammar and spelling surely a site dedicated to virtually every type of sexual activity known to mankind is not the place to come. The reason I visit this site is to read about predominantly fantasy situations where members of the opposite sex end up fucking each other's brains out and in the process making me so horny that I finish up masturbating and relieving my pent up sexual urges.
I particularly loved the scenes in this story when Amy became involved and was the instigator of Grant playing with and eventually fucking his own sister. This was such a turn on and kept me as hard as a rock throughout the whole scenario.
At the end of the day Nikki these are your stories and you and you alone take them in the direction that you want them to go in. My comment to people who don' necessarily like your direction is to go and red somebody else's work and leave you to write totally unfettered.
They have the Booker Prize for Literature which I doubt you would stand very much chance of winning however if they had the Fucker Prize for Erotic Literature you would win it hands down.
Keep up the good work.
when she went after daddy it killed it for me. great read up until then though, thank you
by
Anonymous12/03/16
More!
Will you continue this delicious story? I'd love for her father to fuck her knowing she's awake!
by
Anonymous01/22/17
Well this sucked
Seriously? Adding the father sucked. It was great up until this point and now it looks like you're not writing as much so this may be how you leave it.
Nikki, I love your story series. I would have been too shy to request your kinky twists but I relish each one you come up with! Please continue this series! Thanks for these stories! :)
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there must be more of this tale of debauchery and seduction inside your perverted brain.. Get back to your keyboard and let your fingers keep typing. You owe it to all your readers who sit panting, dripping and wanting more.. Thank you in advance for your words so far.... PS.. I think I love you..!
I will miss this
Thais is and fas fantastic keep writing pls nikki u are Fantastic!
Family gathering
This is s great story! Amy needs to meet dad! ;-)
not so good.
It was good right up to the point of other people getting involved especially her dad. Why can't some of you writers write a good story of siblings being together yes there is going to be times when they will find it hard but if it is love between them it will survive if its just lust then know doubt it will crash and they will end up not talking or see each other for a very long time.
more please!!!!
this series has been so HOT!! when is the next chapter cumming? soon please
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story was soooooo great up until this chapter. The dad absolutely ruined it
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about Dad joining in at this point... sorta stretching my suspension of disbelief, but still hot....... either way, I hope you keep adding to this series. Can't just leave it there.
Nikki you have the most disgusting, perverted, filthy, crude and dirty imagination and
I fucking love it. What would be the point of writing a story about incest between a brother and sister if they were the only two people involved. It would get pretty boring very quickly if it was just the two of them constantly fucking, as there are only so many positions and holes for them to go at. But, introduce other ingredients into the mix and you very quickly get a story that can be kept interesting and keeps the reader guessing as to what will happen next.
I have read a lot of your work recently and in my opinion you are one of the best writers of erotic stories on this site. I fail to understand a lot of the criticism you receive from members of this site. If they want perfect grammar and spelling surely a site dedicated to virtually every type of sexual activity known to mankind is not the place to come. The reason I visit this site is to read about predominantly fantasy situations where members of the opposite sex end up fucking each other's brains out and in the process making me so horny that I finish up masturbating and relieving my pent up sexual urges.
I particularly loved the scenes in this story when Amy became involved and was the instigator of Grant playing with and eventually fucking his own sister. This was such a turn on and kept me as hard as a rock throughout the whole scenario.
At the end of the day Nikki these are your stories and you and you alone take them in the direction that you want them to go in. My comment to people who don' necessarily like your direction is to go and red somebody else's work and leave you to write totally unfettered.
They have the Booker Prize for Literature which I doubt you would stand very much chance of winning however if they had the Fucker Prize for Erotic Literature you would win it hands down.
Keep up the good work.
Licks and kisses returned
Charlie
that will do me
when she went after daddy it killed it for me. great read up until then though, thank you
More!
Will you continue this delicious story? I'd love for her father to fuck her knowing she's awake!
Well this sucked
Seriously? Adding the father sucked. It was great up until this point and now it looks like you're not writing as much so this may be how you leave it.
More!
Nikki, I love your story series. I would have been too shy to request your kinky twists but I relish each one you come up with! Please continue this series! Thanks for these stories! :)
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