All Comments on 'The Run'

Another classic story, Colleen - feels like you're really there (and I know I'd like to have been Nelson's decker, watching the action...). Keep them together - and maybe a sequel?

Never thought I'd see a SR story on this site. Great story, I envy any runner you GM.

This one was very good! Keep it up.

All around excellent story. Seldom does one come across an erotic story where they rush past the sex scenes to continue with the plot. The future-tech world is a prestigious and crowded sub-genre of sci-fi but this author manages to stake out her own corner in it quite sucessfully.

This is the best story I have ever read on Literotica. As another commentator said, the story is as good, if not better than the sex scenes, and they are excellent. I would love to see a sequel, or better a series with these and maybe other characters too.

Yet another masterpiece from the best author I've read. A talent for creating a world of details that pull the reader into the story. So much more than just sex. A standing ovation for this work.

Wonderful! I hope you're planning on bringing Margo and Lana back for another story. The novels can't be too far off now. Look out NY Times, Colleen is coming!

My god girl I thought I was reading a story by William Gibson himself but then I realised that this was better than anything he wrote. Write on Girl you are the reason I come back to Lit love your work.

You've created a fan for life.

Much love to you :)

Wow... another of your stories has completely blown me away. The story puts me in mind of Shadowrun... only Shadowrun didn't have two hot women making love *lol*

Once again, great job, and I can't wait to see some new stuff from you.

This is definately the most captivating story i've yet to read on literotica! i hope that eventually you will make a sequel to this masterpiece. Thank You!!

Never thought I'd find another Cyberpunk author who actually wrote good shit! In the tradition of the great William Gibson, I felt part of the story. It felt like the Neuromancer.

It started "straight" forward enough. It went down hill from there :-)

Good read.

Top Story, true erotica with the sex adding to the plot unlike much of the porn on here. Thankyou

Colleen may have died but her works could be turned into an anthology. Why on earth don't literotica do it as an e-book or hard copy? She wrote so well.

right up my alley. i loved your gibson-style writing throughout. fun to immerse myself in that dark sexy messy dystopic world... and your lesbian love affairs are always so much more believable than anything else on literotica. love you.

I have to nitpick, though, because it made my head hurt. Please, please, please, learn the difference between "loose" and "lose," and pay more attention to your/you're. You're a good enough writer that minor bobbles like those are jarring.

This was a fantastic story, though I do agree with the top commenter re: proofreading. The grammar/spelling issues are very jarring, especially considering how awesome the story is.

i really enjoyed this story so much both lana and margo are such great characters, i hope this turns into a longer series and we see that other woman again :D

Its been a while since I've read any good cyber-punk (especially Shadowrun) fan fiction, and the fact that you told a good story that was also hot as hell is pretty impressive.

Thank you for sharing what I hope is the start of a great series.

Its been ages since i read a shadowrunner novel, and your addition was a great. Better since it had the great erotic side of the shadows.

Sad to read the comment that Colleen is dead.

Loved the story. It was great literature first, erotica second!

That, like all her other stories, was fantastic work. Did Colleen really pass on? When did it happen? Anyone?

Good story reminiscent of early cyberpunk.

My god, but I miss Colleen Thomas' writing.

She could have us fooled? A talented male writer disguised as CT? Hmm never know do we?

:vomit: At least this story didn't have elves. That saved it.

Great sexy sci-fi blend. Was this inspired by Neuromancer?

Tough future AI tale, but will be happen in short …. First seen in a movie and then reality is short on the heels ….. so lucky girls with a bright future ….. great deal great job ….. well done

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