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My Pretty, Little Apron

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by Anonymous

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by sean_mich11/12/15

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Thank you for sharing another great story.

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by HiMyNameIsKen11/13/15

Cute voice

Not bad I would imagine you could make a very fun Daddy daughter story..

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by Dark_Storm11/14/15

Too minor complaints

There was nothing wrong with your voice or the story. My main complaint is it sounded like it was recorded in front of a window air conditioner or some other blower running full blast. There was a constant mechanical hum or rushing sound in the background from the very start and throughout the audio. It was distracting.

One last minor quibble, in the description you said, "I love taking care of you, Daddy", yet in the audio you never used the word "Daddy", which was a bit of a disappointment.

Other than that, I enjoyed the story well enough.

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by Dark_Storm11/14/15

Oops

The title of my previous commentary should have read "Two minor complaints", not "Too..." That what I get for writing comments at 4 AM. ;-)

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by 11/21/15

MOAR errrrrrrr MORE and soon!

Love that voice, the sexy story and the fun sexiness of it all!
Rock hard ,many thanks sexy girl!

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