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A Date with Black Pt. 01

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by AnnetteBishop10/31/15

Great start

I love young love. Wish I were young again. xoxoxox Annette
Keep writing, great start

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by dk51911/01/15

Spelling and Grammar Fixes

would really help your story along. I found it difficult to read and it stopped me from getting into it. You have what seems like a sexy concept going on. If you fix the writing, then this will have the makings of a nice series.

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