All Comments on 'The Lesbian & The Stripper'
by hfernandez1983
- 15 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoI read this out loud to me gf and she got herself off 3 times before I finished. When I finished reading she finished me off in less than 5 minutes. Well done piece. Oh so hot
Anonymousover 8 years agoreceived this from dear annony today in my e mail;
Why are you back you old dry-up bitch? Fucking worthless cunt! DIE you decomposing cunt !
heheeh The fucking coward has no balls!! he she it...IT was scared to leave It's email address so I can write him back. Or maybe find him and then remove him completely!!
Anonymousover 8 years agoVery, very well done. Illustrations were amazing and helped me visualize these two incredible women. The story flowed nicely and was well-developed. It is obvious you took great care with this project and I think all the work and attention to detail paid off. There was some awkward sentence structure that makes me think English is not your native tongue, but it did not detract significantly from the overall effectiveness of the story. And some of the dialog seemed kind of stilted. People don't usually speak with grammatical perfection; they use slang and verbal shortcuts to express feelings and emotions. This is a common fault I find with a lot of dialog in Literotica stories. All that being said, I look forward to your next story. Nice job!!
deziredover 8 years agoGraphics rendering seems to be good. What software did you use?
Anonymousover 8 years agoShared this with my sister. We both enjoy going to strip clubs and having dancers give us lap dances. The girls really go all out for another girl, sure all of them are bi like my sister and me. Great story and lovely pictures. Hope you write more. Tammy and April
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