All Comments on 'The Scene Ch. 05: Curtain Call'

I enjoyed all five chapters, Wow! Such a hot little thing cumming five times and he great control too.

Think mom's going to see that bump before too long as I don't think she was telling the truth about being safe to cum inside her.

Waiting for the next part and the twins.

You are a v tallanted writer. I loved the story. Continue the story dear. I would love to see what happens on the Tuesday, and when she gets pregnant, how her does harry handle it and her mom too. Would love to see him holding her twins in his arms

- please pick one -

not the least of which is that Chloe's mom and Harry's wife can have a heart to heart - or whatever - and the four of them come to an understanding

exquisitely crafted - I had to stop a couple of times during the series to reload

Will be checking your page regularly, very excited to see what other work you may have lined up! The slow build up was exquisite, please don't deviate from that style in the future xoxo

I love the ending. Though most may want a continuation of this series, I think it ends perfectly here. Harry's "made his decision". So much more realistic than him leavng his wife to impregnate a young girl starting college. The ending as it stands ties the story together beautifully. Of course I would never object to more of this story. But I think I understand that Harry loves her too much and feels it's best to end things sooner...a bittersweet conclusion. Overall your writing is amazing, the way in which the story unfolds is subtle and fluid and extremely sensual. Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work. - Azura x

Holy shit i sat here for an hour just reading your stories we neef ch 6 plsss

Please continue the series it's so amazing I want to see what happens to them

This was the hottest series