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Visiting You At The Office

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by Anonymous

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by GoodWifey01/06/04

Write some more

this is so much better than the usual cheating wife crap on Literotica.
keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous01/06/04

OOOO horny

This is one of the best pieces of writing in the world. Who is this girl?!! She should be out there rich as the Harry Potter author! SHe must have a very lucky satisfied blokey lol!

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by Anonymous01/06/04

What happened that night?

So did he get his own back? We demand to know....

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by gemsy2101/12/04

re: what happened that night

you will have to keep demanding to know untill i get some time and inspiration to write the next part! :) glad u liked it!

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by Nightowl2108/25/04

You're a gem

Yes, gem you'll have to write about what happened that night. She sounds like a woman after my heart!!
Why do I feel that you have actually lived it?

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by wistful_of_oz01/19/16

Writing in the second person ...

Writing in the second person is as boring as batshit.
Writing to tell someone who was there?
Was there ever a surprise? Was there ever a purpose?
Never found one that was interesting.
Must have missed someting every time.

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