If I could ask for one thing only, it would be to ready one of your stories once a week!!
Just love the way you write, what you write about and.... To cum while reading it.
Please do keep going!
"Ignore the haters" they say. Typical of an ignorance that cannot deal with alternative points of view. All too prevalent in our society today.
You lost me in this story line when you had the son start treating his mother as a piece of meat. Obviously you are going to turn her into a submissive, masochistic slut who does whatever his perverted little mind can conceive. This family will and should be destroyed.
As for what to do with the father, give him a break and remove him from the equation via divorce and estrangement. He does not deserve what is happening to him and they do not deserve him.
It was great until the last part of this submission. Thanks for writing!
To the last commenter, I appreciate your point, although I disagree.
The son only gets more aggressive as the mom allows it and it is her list of fantasies that stirs the son into action.
I do agree the father is pathetic and deserves better and in upcoming chapters, especially part 4-6 you will see that all come to a head.
But this story is about a mom's sexual re-awakening at the hands and cock of her son and it will continue to focus on that.
That all said, I appreciate the constructive critique... although I hope the story hasn't jumped the shark already as I'm hard at work on part 5 at the moment.
Part 3: Gloryhole Slut will be out in January
Pat 4: Husband's Asleep likely in March (a quick episode where they fuck in the hotel room with dad in it)
Part 5: Jam-packed with Cum in April (last day of the trip where she tries to retrieve a load in each hole)
I also have 7 more chapter ideas in this lengthy submissive journey if readers want to read more of Sarah and her son.
Jasmine December 2015
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Anonymous12/19/15
Great story!!!
This story is perfect I wish I could fuck my mom! I would give her my virgin seed! I would eat and fuck her make her my slave!
by
Anonymous12/21/15
5/5 need more
This story is so good mad e me cum on multiple occasions I need more, I see part three is coming in January but omg so good I need more. Your such a good author. Also any hot females who liked this story and wanna exchange nudes my kik is Daweise.
Just learned that part 3: Backseat Mommy: Gloryhole will be out tomorrow (Jan 13, 2016).
Jasmine
I hope you enjoy.
by
Anonymous01/18/16
The best!
You are a fantastic writer, I love just about all of your stories! Keep up the good work, there are lots of us here who eagerly wait for your next story. Thanks!
by
Anonymous02/03/16
Shy Mom
I think that u are one of my favourite writer....i love u...since i am a bit shy i would love to read one story where son is texting msg to his mom while she is with husband...the text is about her past but a lot of naughty question and mom is verry shy so she try to answer but at first some shy answers(if u understand me)....love u aggain and sorry about my english..i hope u understand what i wanted to tell u...kissess2366
by
Anonymous02/12/16
Backseat fun
This story just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Ready to read more.
Jan
m_lijk@hotmail.com
by
Anonymous02/26/16
Was good
Until you added the black guy. That just ruined any other part to this story.
I am just discovering your work and it is rare that I discover anything new in this jaded porn-obsessed world. I love the way you phrase your thoughts. You have excellent flow and you exude style, you ejaculate style even like so much of the cum you so artistically write about. Doubtful you will read this, but I shall continue- your pacing is spot-on. The banter between characters is entertaining and light, but manages to keep a heavy sexuality about it. The fantasies you detail are exciting. I find it funny how you are turning former fans of your work away with the addition of new fantasies. I read your work because you have a fucking sexy, raunchy, dirty, articulate, creative, intelligent mind. You are a prolific writer, obviously well-read, and have about the driest, sharpest wit I have ever seen online. These intellectual qualities, and your pure writing skills make your writing intriguing and are the sexiest part of your stories.
by
Anonymous05/13/16
Was going great until.....
You were doing a great job with your version of a story that has already been done several times. As a matter of fact, your's was the best until you had to go and start the submissive / slave crap. It seems that lately, every erotic story written anywhere has to have that in it. It's not necessary in this story. It was sizzling hot up until then. The best thing to do is go ahead and get mom knocked up ( please!) , let dumb ass dad think he did it and end the story while its still hot. I have a feeling that you're about to destroy it. Too bad. I'm going to check out the next chapter and see if its worth my time to finish this series. Hoping for better but preparing to bail.
by
Anonymous08/03/16
Tittylover
Great story pitty about the submissive bit. Not many sluts are submissive. I know that from experience.
This was good until you started the Master Crap. Now he is a horny teenaged boy with the title of Master. He will fuck up his father's and mother's marriage and his mother's life and wonder what the hell happened. Also, I never in any story like the vision of a boy shareing his mother with other men. They just discovered their attraction to each other and you've already written him passing her around. Point Made! This story in the first part was good. It was a simple mother/son love/sex story with a clueless father. Now you are complicating it with titles and unnecessary characters. This is going downhill and I'm disappointed because I know you can do so much better.
What I've learned here is that all asses, male or female, appear to feel the same magnificent pleasure in being skillfully fucked!!
And no, I'm not gay. Not that there's anything at all wrong with that!
English
If I could ask for one thing
If I could ask for one thing only, it would be to ready one of your stories once a week!!
Just love the way you write, what you write about and.... To cum while reading it.
Please do keep going!
You Lost Me
"Ignore the haters" they say. Typical of an ignorance that cannot deal with alternative points of view. All too prevalent in our society today.
You lost me in this story line when you had the son start treating his mother as a piece of meat. Obviously you are going to turn her into a submissive, masochistic slut who does whatever his perverted little mind can conceive. This family will and should be destroyed.
As for what to do with the father, give him a break and remove him from the equation via divorce and estrangement. He does not deserve what is happening to him and they do not deserve him.
It was great until the last part of this submission. Thanks for writing!
Author's Note
To the last commenter, I appreciate your point, although I disagree.
The son only gets more aggressive as the mom allows it and it is her list of fantasies that stirs the son into action.
I do agree the father is pathetic and deserves better and in upcoming chapters, especially part 4-6 you will see that all come to a head.
But this story is about a mom's sexual re-awakening at the hands and cock of her son and it will continue to focus on that.
That all said, I appreciate the constructive critique... although I hope the story hasn't jumped the shark already as I'm hard at work on part 5 at the moment.
Part 3: Gloryhole Slut will be out in January
Pat 4: Husband's Asleep likely in March (a quick episode where they fuck in the hotel room with dad in it)
Part 5: Jam-packed with Cum in April (last day of the trip where she tries to retrieve a load in each hole)
I also have 7 more chapter ideas in this lengthy submissive journey if readers want to read more of Sarah and her son.
Jasmine December 2015
Great story!!!
This story is perfect I wish I could fuck my mom! I would give her my virgin seed! I would eat and fuck her make her my slave!
5/5 need more
This story is so good mad e me cum on multiple occasions I need more, I see part three is coming in January but omg so good I need more. Your such a good author. Also any hot females who liked this story and wanna exchange nudes my kik is Daweise.
I agree with that one commentor
I don't like what your doing to the father, I liked this story at first, but I'm going to have to drop it...
Great story!
I think that you should keep this chain going I have read both parts and look forward to part 3! The ideas for part 3-6 sounds good! Keep it up
Heck yeah!
"I also have 7 more chapter ideas in this lengthy submissive journey if readers want to read more of Sarah and her son."
Do you even need to ask? ;)
LOL Thanks
Thanks for the last comment...
For all, the next 4 chapters will deal with the father issue... although it gets worse before it gets better.
Part three out this week....
Author Comment
Just learned that part 3: Backseat Mommy: Gloryhole will be out tomorrow (Jan 13, 2016).
Jasmine
I hope you enjoy.
The best!
You are a fantastic writer, I love just about all of your stories! Keep up the good work, there are lots of us here who eagerly wait for your next story. Thanks!
Shy Mom
I think that u are one of my favourite writer....i love u...since i am a bit shy i would love to read one story where son is texting msg to his mom while she is with husband...the text is about her past but a lot of naughty question and mom is verry shy so she try to answer but at first some shy answers(if u understand me)....love u aggain and sorry about my english..i hope u understand what i wanted to tell u...kissess2366
Backseat fun
This story just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Ready to read more.
Jan
m_lijk@hotmail.com
Was good
Until you added the black guy. That just ruined any other part to this story.
soo good
please keep going writing more adventures on this
Great Story Line
Love the story. Them sneaking around is so nasty. Great
Wet...
Loved this story and the previous one. Got me all bot and bothered.
Amazing writing.
Down the Rabbit Hole You Go...
I am just discovering your work and it is rare that I discover anything new in this jaded porn-obsessed world. I love the way you phrase your thoughts. You have excellent flow and you exude style, you ejaculate style even like so much of the cum you so artistically write about. Doubtful you will read this, but I shall continue- your pacing is spot-on. The banter between characters is entertaining and light, but manages to keep a heavy sexuality about it. The fantasies you detail are exciting. I find it funny how you are turning former fans of your work away with the addition of new fantasies. I read your work because you have a fucking sexy, raunchy, dirty, articulate, creative, intelligent mind. You are a prolific writer, obviously well-read, and have about the driest, sharpest wit I have ever seen online. These intellectual qualities, and your pure writing skills make your writing intriguing and are the sexiest part of your stories.
Was going great until.....
You were doing a great job with your version of a story that has already been done several times. As a matter of fact, your's was the best until you had to go and start the submissive / slave crap. It seems that lately, every erotic story written anywhere has to have that in it. It's not necessary in this story. It was sizzling hot up until then. The best thing to do is go ahead and get mom knocked up ( please!) , let dumb ass dad think he did it and end the story while its still hot. I have a feeling that you're about to destroy it. Too bad. I'm going to check out the next chapter and see if its worth my time to finish this series. Hoping for better but preparing to bail.
Tittylover
Great story pitty about the submissive bit. Not many sluts are submissive. I know that from experience.
So wet
Great story making me very wet
Fuck the haters
Your writing is amazing! Seriously I just spent a few hours reading your stories. Keep writing please!
Keep them cumming, er, coming...
Great stories. I want more.
So Good
This was good until you started the Master Crap. Now he is a horny teenaged boy with the title of Master. He will fuck up his father's and mother's marriage and his mother's life and wonder what the hell happened. Also, I never in any story like the vision of a boy shareing his mother with other men. They just discovered their attraction to each other and you've already written him passing her around. Point Made! This story in the first part was good. It was a simple mother/son love/sex story with a clueless father. Now you are complicating it with titles and unnecessary characters. This is going downhill and I'm disappointed because I know you can do so much better.
Technicalities
Incest isn't illegal if it's consensual.
Bi-sexual arses
What I've learned here is that all asses, male or female, appear to feel the same magnificent pleasure in being skillfully fucked!!
And no, I'm not gay. Not that there's anything at all wrong with that!
Mmmmmmmm
More more much more. I love playing with my cock. Reading your magnificent story!!!!!!!!!!!
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