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by Anonymous

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by greenmountaineer11/03/15

Interesting use of the passive voice

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by Piscator11/08/15

Few things worse than no coffee in the morning.

With respect to your last lines, a long ago friend wrote an essay in behavioural ecology on how male Homo sapiens' higher body temperature contributes to pair bonding.

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by HoneyAdored11/12/15

Whimsical...

...undertones made me smile and I enjoyed the writing style very much.

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