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Amanda's Worlds

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by impo_6111/07/15

A funny story, more romance, but a good LW's...

A funny story, well written, more romance, but a good LW's...And if the writer feels the need can have a part 2...3*

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by mike969811/07/15

nice

this was very good. if you really wanted to make it funny you shouldve made one of her personalities a lesbian.

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by LeFrog0811/07/15

Intriguing

He's getting 2 different lovers/personalities in a single spectacular body.
This was a very interesting premise for a story...well done.

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by Drbeamer333311/08/15

Wishful thinking. Thanks for the offering.

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by swedishreader111/08/15

fun story

Out there but really good.

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by Parttimereader11/09/15

TV show same premise

United States of Tara

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by looking4it11/09/15

One of the things I'm most impressed with is the fact you were able to get all of this told in a relatively short story.

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by gatorhermit03/17/16

Strange Story - could have been in Romance

Interesting twists and turns. I like the character development and the ending. Very entertaining story, but I would have put it in Romane.

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by acup11/17/16

To all the doubters

I was married to the same situation for almost ten years, but only knowing about it for the last four. You think the two or three personalities is bad, try dealing with almost twenty, ranging in age from her physical age to kids down to ten. Oh and don't forget the mix of BOYS in the bunch.

That being said, there is something to be said for bedding a different woman every night of the week and not actually 'cheating' on them. Even switching off in the middle of sex. Starting off kissing and groping one, and switching out to another as you head for her pussy 'because that's her job'.

One tweak in the story line. Most alters are aware of the others to one degree or another. Some 'in passing' as they change, others 'peeking' to see what's going on with the others or keeping an eye on the children personalities.

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