Gwen is so real, and I love the way she is gradually becoming more open about her abandonment of her previously conservative behaviour. I'm pretty sure a psychologist would advise that living a secret life isn't mentally healthy, so this gradual development of the storyline makes perfect sense.
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Anonymous11/08/15
Still worth the wait? Not as sure...
I've been enjoying this series for a long, long time and I usually don't mind the wait between chapters. This one just felt like it was wandering a bit and series is starting to drag on. There are a lot of storylines involving Gwen now that need progress. Maybe something with Jason might be intriguing but it'll take til 2017 to get there. Or Andrew, or Cliff, or Cricket, or Liz, or Miss Ritter...will it take a year and a half, like with Natalie, for her to sort out where she finally draws the line with each of these people?
Overall, the writing is still really good, if not somewhat repetitive when covering familiar ground in her sexy times.
Glad you are keeping this story moving along. The opening up with Ali was something that needed to happen. There are other loose ends that still need to be followed up and I hope to see these in future chapters. As for 'The Slut' v 'The Lady' battle - naturally this is going to continue but some of the better chapters have been where this has not been overdone. By now I would have hoped to see 'The Lady' in some sort of retreat to eventually be vanquished by the end of the series.
Anyway - well done. Another 5* from me.
Slow good... Always something to look forward to. Thank you for this installment
I actually forgot to check for a couple weeks....
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Anonymous12/04/15
Awesome!
Nice to read a mature story for once. I check a few times a week to see if the next chapter is out or not. If you are too busy now due to the holidays that's fine, but am really looking forward to seeing this continue.
I suspect there is probably over 7000 of us hard core fans waiting for the story to continue.
No pressure.. :)
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Anonymous10/20/16
All right...all ready!
Lets get things moving...Gwen acts like she is 16 years old...too much repetitive bullshit by her in actions and her thinking...Let's move on...just a little quicker than cold molasses would be better than the speed you have Gwen moving at now!! And get rid of the Lady and the Slut....too much of them for sure!!
English
Fabulous!
Wonderful
Gwen is so real, and I love the way she is gradually becoming more open about her abandonment of her previously conservative behaviour. I'm pretty sure a psychologist would advise that living a secret life isn't mentally healthy, so this gradual development of the storyline makes perfect sense.
Still worth the wait? Not as sure...
I've been enjoying this series for a long, long time and I usually don't mind the wait between chapters. This one just felt like it was wandering a bit and series is starting to drag on. There are a lot of storylines involving Gwen now that need progress. Maybe something with Jason might be intriguing but it'll take til 2017 to get there. Or Andrew, or Cliff, or Cricket, or Liz, or Miss Ritter...will it take a year and a half, like with Natalie, for her to sort out where she finally draws the line with each of these people?
Overall, the writing is still really good, if not somewhat repetitive when covering familiar ground in her sexy times.
Good chapter
Glad you are keeping this story moving along. The opening up with Ali was something that needed to happen. There are other loose ends that still need to be followed up and I hope to see these in future chapters. As for 'The Slut' v 'The Lady' battle - naturally this is going to continue but some of the better chapters have been where this has not been overdone. By now I would have hoped to see 'The Lady' in some sort of retreat to eventually be vanquished by the end of the series.
Anyway - well done. Another 5* from me.
Love the story
I have been reading this from the beginning and i cant wait to read the next installment. Great character development. Looking forward to the next.
Ok then
Slow good... Always something to look forward to. Thank you for this installment
I actually forgot to check for a couple weeks....
Awesome!
Nice to read a mature story for once. I check a few times a week to see if the next chapter is out or not. If you are too busy now due to the holidays that's fine, but am really looking forward to seeing this continue.
I suspect there is probably over 7000 of us hard core fans waiting for the story to continue.
No pressure.. :)
All right...all ready!
Lets get things moving...Gwen acts like she is 16 years old...too much repetitive bullshit by her in actions and her thinking...Let's move on...just a little quicker than cold molasses would be better than the speed you have Gwen moving at now!! And get rid of the Lady and the Slut....too much of them for sure!!
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