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Love it!!! More, more more!!! Please, please, please!!!
I would love it more if it was longer, but please don't stop!
Longer please
Very interesting, looking forward to other chapters, but make them longer and more frequent! PLEASE!
Jerry
This IS the romance section, Get Jerry out of it IMO
Good Reading****
Very entertaining story line. Thanks for sharing.
Lose/loose
Are two very different words. Misusing them completely throws me out of the story.
Also, I'm not sure about the POV switching, especially unannounced. It was a bit jarring the first time with Ben, but adding Jerry to the rotation is perhaps a step too far.
Romance is Possible ...
... for three people, if they're the right people.
Some of Us Prefer Threesomes
When it's the right combination. Thank you for adding this spice to your story.
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