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Breed Me Daddy

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/14/15

loved it

I masturbated all the way until the end.. felt so good

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Slight mistake

A "prologue" is what comes *before* the story [literally "before-story"]. The "pro" in that word is the same as the one in "prospector" (the guy who checks a piece of land *before* major investments are made [literally "before-looker"]).
The word you were looking for is "epilogue" [which literally means "after/behind-story"].

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Loved it!

I loved it by far the best Daddy Daughter story I've ever read. I was actually able to come with this one.

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by ashadebetter11/14/15

RE: Slight Mistake

Thanks for pointing that out. That is what I get for writing after being up for over 24 hours. My editor missed this as well. I have submitted a corrected copy to the Editors.

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Loved it I came so hard

Thank you for reminding me how good sex with my daughter was. She did a similar thing. She would bend over in a micro skirt and I could get one heck of a pussy shot. She would wait for her mom to leave for work and then she go Dom her rm to the shower showing her goodies. We
ML in her bed until she was
Pregnant then the three of us took care of Maria she was still wanting to screw my brains out and yes shePregnant again but the x figured who got her pregnant well we left the area and got a place where people thought we were a family. We
Are still together keep writing

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Yummy

Awesome story... how I fantasized getting fucked over and over again by my daddy.

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by Rasmat11/15/15

Never got much from Daddy-Daughter stories.

Until I read this one! Great work. Five stars. Was going to make the same point about prologue. But it's moot now.

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by Anonymous11/15/15

Um...

Your prologue sounds a lot like an epilogue...js

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by Tigersman11/15/15

Loved it

I really loved this story. The plot was simple but you paid attention to detail so that your readers got hooked. I thought the fact the daughter had multiple pregnancies was fantastic. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous11/15/15

Great story ... Please go on ...

I really loved your story... A simple plot, but you paid superb attention to the sexy details ... Please write more stories like this... Can't wait...

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by Anonymous11/15/15

A good girl

This is what the ultimate evolution of daddy daughter love looks like. Many daughters will tease their daddy as they hone their skills of flirting. Leave the door open a crack, or snuggle up to daddy, but a truly loving daughter goes the full distance like this young lady does. Mommy has forsaken daddy for some younger creep, and the daughter does not want daddy's attention going to some random woman, so she gives daddy the best pussy on earth his daughters. I loved the fact that this young girl wants her daddy to breed her, to hump away on her unprotected pussy and fill her with seed is the ultimate taboo. She has now replaced mommy and is the woman in daddy's life. The neighbor would not be surprised with the quick succession of baby's if they new daddy was mounting his little girl. I bet they do it every day, I'll bet this little minx shows her pregnant belly to daddy and says look at what you did daddy, I'll bet in the next story she dresses in even sexier lingerie and begs daddy for even more of his seed.

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by Anonymous11/16/15

very good

And I usually don't like Daddy/Daughter stories. Most of the time they are written by fathers wanting to take their 14yr old little girls. The bastards don't generally want to wait until she can choose for herself. This is different. She wants him and He wants her too. But he waits until she makes the first move, as a good father should. Really good Daddy/Daughter sex is hard to come by and I congratulate you.

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by Anonymous11/16/15

Whether or not little girl was old enough to make her own decision it is obvious that there is something mentally wrong with her. Also dad was naked at start of story but later she is rubbing his cock through his briefs. Poor editing. Poor story. Poor readers.

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by fr4511/17/15

Erotic

The sex was erotic and the story is well deserving of the 5* 's I gave it.

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by Anonymous11/17/15

an outstanding story

And I love the comment of the reader who wrote "a good girl." Everybody knows that lots and lots of boys are attracted to their mother. What this story and the perceptive comment show is that plenty of girls are attracted to their father. No surprise there. For a girl her daddy's the very incarnation of masculine power and authority. She gets plenty of opportunities to notice what daddy's got jumping around in his pants, the very symbol and implement of his male power. Her father's fat veiny daddy-dick. And just as mothers often feel lust for their big strapping young son, so many a father is drawn to his baby girl's feminine charms. Her lovely breasts, her perky little ass, and most of all the adorable little coochie he knows she's hiding between her slender thighs. Dad gets hard in his pants thinking about his baby girl's sweet little slit. He's given his darling girl many presents in the past and now he itches to give her one real big present (guess what). When things work out, baby girl's got a present for her father too. As the commenter wrote, "she gives daddy the best pussy on earth, his own daughter's." Dad slides his big fat cock up her pretty little cunt, he grunts and growls, she whimpers and moans. He gives his little princess one great cum after another, and he ends by blowing his heavy loaded daddy-balls and shooting her up to her pretty little ears full of some of the same semen that made her. Now they both know that the best, most soothing filling for a daughter's tight little twat is her own father's warm creamy semen.

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Love it.

Love the added lustfulness of impregnating his own daughter. TOTALLY adored this, short and sweet as candy :) love danielle x

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by Anonymous12/14/15

Sweet

I've always had a fascination w daddy/daughter stories, but I just found out I was Preg, by an older man, old enuf to b my daddy, and this story made me envision him while I read it....I call him daddy.

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by Anonymous01/02/16

love this story, so full of love

How I wish i was this baby girl, would love to breed with my daddy. Would luv to read more....

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by Anonymous01/16/16

As it should be

I fucked my daughter on her 18th birthday and got her pregnant. I raised the baby for her when a she went to college and then I have her another baby. Every father should fuck their daughter and get then pregnant at least once.

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by Anonymous02/06/16

Sweet

I want my daddy to fuck me so much. I use to meet and fuck older guys online, guys around his age or older, just to imagine that it's my daddy who is fucking me. For a few months now I'm letting some of these guys cum inside my pussy and when I get back home with no panties on, I try and make my daddy see my pussy all dirty. I know that he's seen it sometimes. I just hope he finally cracks and do the same.

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by Anonymous02/10/16

Uhm

How is she getting pregnant if she's on the pill? At first, when she described using her pill and a breast pump to induce lactation, I thought maybe she was talking about something in the past. But, she was still lactating when she was with her Daddy, sooo.....

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by Anonymous02/28/16

Thanks to the Web and to well written stories like this,daughter breeding is no longer the taboo it used to be.

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by Anonymous03/26/16

awful. rated it 1

She's a whore. And had sex before. Hate stories like this. Would be 9 but that impossible.

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by Susanlynn06/16/16

????

Let's see, first daddy isn't wearing any pajamas, then he's got shorts on, then briefs. She's on the pill but still gets pregnant ( yes that's possible, not probable, but possible), and daddy is in a deeper sleep than any human I've ever read about or heard of. It's a good story plot wise. Just too many improbabilities going on. 3 stars for your effort.

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by Anonymous11/22/16

Loved Daddy

Love stories where Daddy is reluctant, and the daughter has to convince him to fuck her. So many stories are dom-Daddy, but I love this premise so much more. Daddy was sooo good and I wanted to fuck him. Daughter was a bit flawed, but his was great for a wank story.

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