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Color Me Disappointed

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/23/04

there is a flood....

your work shows an enormous flow of raw emotion with only a subtle glimpse to the written word...your readers would do well to allow their gates to open and ride! thanks again

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by LeBroz01/31/07

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An interesting read though when you slip into mangled Yoda-speak in the middle, I have to wonder what you're thinking. Plus, there's really very little substance here, though a hint of possibilities.

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