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Shooting On A Train

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/23/15

You can't ...

spell and you can't write!

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by Dishie11/24/15

Not sure what this was...

This wasn't a story. I can't put into words what I even think this was. It was like you were sitting with a friend telling her that you jacked a guy off and you shrugged your shoulders and said, "Meh." The end. It actually sucked.

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by Anonymous11/24/15

shooting on a train

Kinky

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by ValensGirl11/26/15

This was pretty hot. Wish there was more of it!

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