My Dear Brother Ch. 02

I WANT A SISTER LIKE JEN

PLEASE SAY THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE THIS STORY.

Intense and Erotic

This second installment is very well done. Clear imagery, believable characters, and unbridled lust all weigh in very well. Any reader with an affinity for the taboo won't be disappointed.

very erotic

wonderul build up

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EXCELLANT !!!!

Loved all... ~~~

Wonderful stories...I'm still hard!!!

The buildup is fantastic

Just came across your writing, the sexual tension is fantastic. Much more believable than mother son or father daughter although I know that truly happens also.
What a way to lose your virginity, to your loving brother, lucky young man...

My Favorite

I was surprised that The Rub was what she decided to do- too many authors would have had her riding it as soon as she could. I appreciate this, as it has always been one of my favorite techniques.

Acceptance

FIRST CLASS, WISHFUL THINKING ON MY PART

contact

Hi Dawn, I tried to email you but the address didn't work - contact me please - Sue

fantastic!

this is so amazing!loved ch1 but this is wonderful :)

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me

my favorite

Hmmm

And the sensuality, erotic play of the two continues.

Chapter 2 is better than Chapter 1...

and I'm hoping the heat will be turned up in the following chapters. I'm really enjoying how these two are getting on with sexual learning.

Never read the like before..

Quite simply the best erotic story writer I have come across (sorry for the pun)...I may have to have a ready supply of wet wipes when reading further chapters....

Gorgeous

Delightfully sexy and so erotic. I need a sister like Jen!, Rod x

Even better!

This chapter fulfills the promise of the first. I like it that Jen and Michael are getting closer to each other and more involved with their sexualities, but aren't rushing headlong into something that one or both of them may not be quite ready for.

You've kept me looking forward to the next chapter.

Instinctive Beings

Nice! 'Never got to do it, but I've always thought two young teens might well want to go beyond digital touching but not all the way, and so the girl takes the boy between her lips and rubs her clitoris up and down his cock until one or both climax. Another case of Literotica rules causing something to be described as between "legal" people that might be more likely between say 12 and 17. I'm sure many readers join me in mentally taking years off many of the characters in some of the stories. Kids become sexual beings as soon as they reach puberty, whether they engage in many sexual activities or not. Why do priests and politicians (and parents) try to deny them one of the most naturally instinctive activities in life?

Loved the sequel. On to the next part now.

Chapter 2 is even better that Chapter 1!

A great continuation of the story. I love how you the wicked desire and 'perverse thrill' each of you were experiencing ... it's so erotic! I also love how you described the way he came! Very well done ... Now, I'm hooked ...