This was a very good read as I was entertained throughout. I thought it was hilarious and sexy even with geeks. I also played some D&D back in the day and wish it were half as eventful. Smootches to the author.
it was great like all your work thank you for the good read.
I've been gaming for years, still do, and I LOVED this story, I must say I've never had a game as fun as that, but me & my Fiance are thinking about basing adventure off it now (how's that for geeky?)
Above & beyond the humor, the writing was well done, I found the dialouge belivable & realistic, sometimes a rarity with the stories here. Awesome Job
I play D&D, still do now and again and this really made me smile.
Cant wait for their next session lol.... Keep up the good work
If only D&D was like this when I used to play. :-)
Like many others here on this message board I too played D&D, but unfortunately I never had a session like murray, david, and adam did with the "Double-D's". Nice touch, keep up the good work.
I used to play D&D in high school, and I do wish the play had been this great back then. Ah, if only... :-)
Writing a long drawn out story doesn't make it creative!
I don't know why this wasn't an editor's pic. What is wrong with those people?
3.5 is the best edition ever. Too bad this wasn't up to date, but it was still a great story.
Next time consult the Book of Erotic Fantasy (aka the D&D sex book).
Yes I am a purist.
Don't listen to anyone that says your story wasn't good. Someone said it wasn't good because it didn't stick with the D & D sex guide. Screw them. It was creative and hot. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next adventure.
i wrote the last comment and had it as a fifty on the thermometer, i meant it to be a hundred.
I never played D&D, but I still enjoyed the read...it was fun. Hey didn't we all want to nail the cheerleaders, back in school. Why do you think they became cheerleaders in the first place?
Another fan here. I guess we all read the wrong rule book when we played. :)
I love all your stories. Up until now I thought you were great now I see you are a God.
Being a D&D fan myself makes the story even better.
I hope you continue writing a lot of these great stories and sequals to this one will be most appreciated but many.
I have read every one of your stories and I gotta hand it to you, you got a gift. Your not like a lot of the other writers who seem to be jacking off to their own story and therefor jump straight to the sex, you set the scene, like in your "Mike & Stuart's Excellent Porno". Anyway, thanks for your most recent edition,
Your biggest fan,
Mate, this was just awesome. I very rarely read a story on here from start to finish, but this had a bit of eveyrthing. Your characterisation and scene setting was great, and the sex (when it came) was hot. Well built up, and you definitely delivered at the end.
I wasn't expecting much when I came in (seeing it in the humour category), but really did enjoy it. As a fellow D&D player myself, I can only hope that a session one day goes this way.
Keep it up, and I for one will keep reading them.
I have read everyone of your stories George and I love everyone. Do one more this George, I loved it
I loved it. I have played D & D, Marvel, Rifts, ETC and would love to see more of the Double D's. Thank you!!!!
Lovely story. I found it funny, and being a D&D fan myself, more than a little like a wish come true. Excellent work.
Title says it all, though two questions:
Do you plan to do more like this, the Cockweasel the Goblin adventures? Please say yes
And where exactly does this group meet.... :)
Despite the extremely irritating attitudes of the two main characters, the story was fantastic! If it wasn't for the constant sloppy typing it would have been perfect! Clean up the English a bit and every line will be a gem.
Not only was this story making me laugh my ass off in several places, it was a lot of fun to read. Nice fantasy. I have actually come close to having something similar happen, only with one girl, and she ended up killing the game by taking the DM out of it with her impatience for sex. lol!
Never played D&D, so had no idea what was going on, but the story was mightily funny and impressively erotic
That was excellent, i don't read many stories on here, but i'm always looking for your latest exploit, keep up the good work.
Funny and hot all at once! I've got to read more of your stuff now.
Probably because I don't know the D&D game, but didn't make an interesting read.
Brilliant piece of literature man! The whole damn story seemed so long, but this shit is so fucking good that 5 pages just wasn't big enough. Keep this stuff coming man, maybe a 'Part 2'?
Like the Double D's themseleves, I can't wait for next week's adventure either! I'd love to see what adventures in fucking the DM can come up with a whole week to prepare.
Excellent story man, I?d like to see
i loved it.. part 2!!!!
The people have spoken! :)
would love to see and read another
I love all your stories, but this might just be the best.
Any chance of a sequel?
Why did this never happen when I played D&D?
Stupid, ridiculous, poorly written, boring, and unoriginal apart from the setting. Utter rubbish and humourless, unless of course you think a geek fucking a cheerleader is funny. Oh yes, ha ha. I'm splitting my sides.
Complete waste of time.
People who vote this high have absolutely no idea.
that was a great story. i haven't read your work in a long time. i had forgotten how good of a writer you were.
One of the very best stories on the site. In fact, it's the only one I've read more than once. That's how hot it was ! Definitely deserves sequels.
Please write asequel - this is the best story on this site! (And I don't even play D & D)
Enjoyable and very erotic.
Too much game playing and not enough fucking. I was asleep by page 3.
Definatly requires a sequel! Their next weeks game!!!
Need a sequel.
Perhaps with the rest of the cheerleading team?
From a former Cheerleader and also LARPer. I found it quite amusing. However I think the cheerleaders should have at least had one orgaism. Also the fact that the GM Went anul is hard to believe as it being his first time. If you are a Real Role Player then you should be able to tell a more believable tale.... But none the less I did enjoy the read laying in bed with my legs spread. ;-)
Actually funny and erotic at the same time. I disagree with those who say it's badly written, I found it moved along briskly and the sex was written in the correct whimsical manner. Great stuff, I'd love a sequel as well!
The story was great. I have played a few games of D&D in my time, and the girls can get a bit suggestive with their comments. I can well imagine things getting out of hand if we had a bit too much to drink while we play.
to the guy who said he fell asleep cuz there isnt enuf sex. damn whts wrong with you? this is one of the hottest stories i have ever read. problem for me was that after page 4 there was a big gap and then page 5 started off much later...... i want to read the whole thing.. can someone fix it up?? thanks.
I think the DM should have ended the session with a winged demon grabbing both female characters and whisking them off.
Then, as the DM, you'd have to play a solo adventure without the two geeks. A solo with two cheerleaders!
Read it all the way through and was very...."satisfied" at the end :) Loved the way it went, just started off a little slow. Fantastic!
i've been playing d & d for many years now, and have yet to get anyone to play the sex convincingly. your story was wonderful fun, and quite erotic. i'll grant the slow start - and i'll give you the small criticism that you should edit a little better (for grammar, etc). otherwise, a jolly fun romp!
This story is well writing and so original I was going nuts. Havn't read as good a story as this in years. There should be a sequel. They can't play next week at there house because mom and dad will be home. So the game gets moved to some ones house. That would be a new guy and the girls bring along a girl friend and lets play another D&D game.
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