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by Anonymous

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by jthserra01/07/04

Some excellent

Mississippi imagery, I could see the steam rising even before they reached the barn.


jim :)

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by Icingsugar01/07/04

Woah.

What a magnificent talent for descriptive imagery you posess. I've never been where this poem takes me, but it feels familiar anyway.

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by annaswirls01/07/04

gunshot rain

love how you started and ended with the lighting two cigarettes AND the imagery

well done

now my son wants to type some letters
he liked the part about the cows jk!

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by Anonymous01/07/04

senses

This poem appeals to many senses. I could see it, feel it, even taste it (the beer, the dust). Thoroughly enjoyed it!
Xtaabay

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by Angeline01/07/04

You made me smile Woman!

For two damn years I've been telling you that you have poetry in you, that you have a gift. Do you have any idea of the narrative power of this poem? The strength of the imagery? The fluency of your voice? And I know you--I know this comes very naturally for you, B. There ain't many who can do this, but you can. Just keep writing please--and editing, too, because your stuff is too good for anything less. xo Ange :)

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by 01/07/04

Visually .......

....this poem is lovely. Narrating simply and succinctly - no word puzzles here. A definite 5.

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by Planet TJ01/19/04

art-work

Thanx for this hot piece of art-work.

lov
TJ

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by ronde02/04/04

Ah, yes

Thank you for reminding me about rain on a tin roof and straw piles.

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