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Extremely well written
5 stars
This is really creepy
I could tell that it was some sexual ritual before I even begun reading it, but I somehow started rooting for her to get away when everything was unraveled.
I'd still be bitter about Steve doing it with Marie if I were in her shoes though.
could there be more?
i know you wrote this for the comtest but im sorta hoping you might continue it? im more interested to see what the town cult ( or cult town?) is all about!
now there's. a Holiday Story!
I so wanted her to stay with the necklace from her Dad and of course the aunt had to defile her also. BAH HIMBUG! Take your @&&+#! Elsewhere!
pretty darn good!
I thought the story was very interesting and good. I especially liked the part where she turned to her aunt for help and she just ended up bringing Cassie back to them. Classic XD! Not to sound like a perv, but I wish there was more detail in the whole sexual experience as well as more sexuality period. I mean, she was a virgin after all and details are important. It was her first time and it can be crazy scary, but it should be SEXY, HORNY-FYING, crazy scary :) Definitely good though 8/10
Disappointed
I wish there was more in the sex scene. Two thirds of the story was working up to this moment and now that it's there, it lacked the luster the rest of the story did. More details in this sex scene. Overall, the story before the sex wasn't worth reading. 4/10
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