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What a waste of data-space!
Chapter 2 will probably feature the fatal car crash caused by either Aunt Maggie or Mom driving while stoned. This author needs to finish high school before trying to write stories!
Idiot commenter
Are you sure you graduated highschool yourself? Smoking pot is stupid to do while driving but it doesnt make a big difference for a lot of people. Bet youre so heavily antidrug that you buy into everything the media tells you. Keep your stupidity to yourself.
Fun
Aside from studies showing stoned drivers are safer drivers, this story was fun, simple, and short: too short :) nothing like a little road trip to bind family together.
Great Start to story
Really enjoyed your first chapter and can't wait for many more to be written. Please continue this story soon I will be looking forward to it.
36DD
36DD is not pert.
"You are so grounded young lady." Of course he would say that. Jesus!
Thank you
I really appreciate everyone's feedback, good and not so great.... I'm no writer. Just experimenting with ideas. I'm trying to develop as a writer and create stories of interest. Kinda nervous even to see ch 2 come out now lol. If you do like my work and would like to see more, let me know! And thanks again!
wondered what a blanket and pot party was
Ok story. What has mum being pharmacist to do with her being reborn hippie. Seems the opposite should be inferred.
Sorry but have pet hate about being told something the person had no knowledge of, or it has not occured at that time in the story. Girl tells us in 2nd paragraph that she did not know parents had no sex for a year. So how could you be telling us that at that time. It also never came up again in the plot so really was unnecessary. It was purely girl wanted to suck on daddy, so she did, twice.
I'm not usually a fan of such short stories.
But this one is , IMO, far superior to most. That it is a first effort is quite impressive. I'll be watching for more. Five well yearned stars. Please continue.
masturbated
masturbated not master-bated
Good start
This is definitely a good start for your first story. Keep writing.
4 Stars
Very nice; very nice, indeed: 4 Stars-worth!
Dear Anonymous
Can I ask WTF you expected from a story about incest?
Please stick to a genera more platible to your overwrought sensibilities.
Agreed
It's incest in the Incest section - simple. Well done, Nymfoholic
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