All Comments on 'Maybe'

by kirok

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

More! Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5+!!!

Loved it!

currentoccupantcurrentoccupantover 8 years ago
Very good dialogue

I don't even have a pee fetish, and I really like this story. The writing, especially the dialogue and inner monologue, is incredibly realistic. These characters seem like they have a fun, loving, sexy relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Whoa

This is really freaking hot. 🔥

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Present or past?

You keep switches tenses and need to decide on one.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 6 years ago
Great first story.

I look forward to your next one. Thanks

EasypeterEasypeteralmost 6 years ago
Hot pisser

Wife pissed on my leg in the shower tonight. I asked what she was doing. She laughed and pulled me into the bed . When we are finished I ask again what got into her. She showed me the story. KEEP THE STORIES COMING. We try a lot of things from the stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pretty good

I'm generally not into the creampie thing, but this is a pretty hot story. There could be more adventures.

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