Yes, this story contains more letters than punctuation marks - that’s the difference between Literotica and porneurotica.
Different folks, different strokes - I care more about the journey than the destination. I like this story, and skip those I’m not interested in.
I like reading about a couple exploring their sexuality and power exchange. It is refreshing that the characters are NOT experienced doms and subs that already have membership in a secret BDSM club. This story does a nice job of chronicling their motivations as they gain that initial experience. I could quibble over a few grammatical things (using "trust" when you meant "thrust") but that is not as important as the story that still comes through. Beautifully written. Please continue.
English
Well Done!!
Please continue.
And he talked her to death.
With all the talk talk talk. Boring........
Keep talking!
Yes, this story contains more letters than punctuation marks - that’s the difference between Literotica and porneurotica.
Different folks, different strokes - I care more about the journey than the destination. I like this story, and skip those I’m not interested in.
Beautiful
I like reading about a couple exploring their sexuality and power exchange. It is refreshing that the characters are NOT experienced doms and subs that already have membership in a secret BDSM club. This story does a nice job of chronicling their motivations as they gain that initial experience. I could quibble over a few grammatical things (using "trust" when you meant "thrust") but that is not as important as the story that still comes through. Beautifully written. Please continue.
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