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by Angeline01/11/04

Lovely!

What a beautiful love poem that is written so fluently. It has a rhythmic musical feel. I would say something other than "filled mind"--maybe "full" or "cluttered," but that's really just a quibble. :)

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by dreamsweet01/12/04

empty/filled

the only real reason I had "filled" was to make use of an allusion to a song. This one probably turned out well because I wrote it while still "high" on that feeling! I didn't want to pound my head on the table, so I stuck with the first word to express that the emptiness is gone. :)

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by 01/12/04

I know

this... I feel it often. Well done. I enjoyed this piece :)

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by Anonymous01/12/04

A treat to come across this

Gentle and loving tribute.

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