All Comments on 'The Salon Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A pun?

" 'Bare with me please... what time on Friday?' '2.00pm.' "

Or did you mean " 'Bear with me please...' ?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lovely story

I really liked this story - a nice change from the usual OTT macho types having their way with the ladies. I'll be interested to see how Jeremy's education develops!

Brett78xBrett78xover 8 years ago
Nicely concptualized

Well thought out story from beginning to so far (???); sensual and ultimately sexual. Be sure to make use of one of the many editors who've offered their services on this website and some of your future stories surely will win competitions that they have @Literotica!

Brett78xBrett78xover 8 years ago
Nice story

Looking forward to the next chapter (chapters??)!

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 8 years ago
Nice story

Shame my masseuse isn't 20 and sexy, and has never offered any extras. But then she doesn't cut hair either.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoyable.

This was an enjoyable story leading us along gently to the end. A.F.C.Somerset

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