by GusBus77
Nerds can get girls. Creepy, breastfeeding men cannot.
I think a given the scenario with time stopping you could explore a few fetishes. Smelling the woman in all her most intimate places perhaps? Just a thought. Thanks for a great first chapter!
But I certainly could have done more than this moron of a "hero" if I had the ability to stop time.
Sounds amazing I'd love to stumble upon someone to suckle my breasts of their milky cream . Thanks for the story ;) poor Ken was never breastfed as a child makes me want to lay his head on my chest and feed him for hours
As per requested, I will be reviving this series and adding another, maybe two chapters. You all should understand that this one, being the pilot, received harsh criticism and perhaps was cut short. (It's not easy to keep writing if your own kinky ideas are causing you to move the laptop eskew from your lap...if you know what I mean). But as there is such a demand, be on the lookout soon for TIME STOPPER CH.2
i was reading another story and saw the title for yours and was curious, i enjoyed it not my usual type of story but you have a talent for writing keep going.
Love your imagination for this storyline, you should definitely continue it!!
I am really am sorry you were dissuaded by any harsh criticism. Yes, your story was short but I really enjoyed your imaginative twist on an old theme about stopping time.
I think of it as a short introduction.... And you should continue writing this as a series of stories all linked by your ability to stop time and what you would do with this ability.
5 stars - I really like time stop/travel stories and this one is fairly decent.