Still looking for the romance in this story. Believe this really belongs in group sex. You define the main character well. But Ben and jerry? Who are they? And just how are they "romancing" her? It's an OK read if your into group I guess. Reader needs to feel the emotion for romance to work, it's just not here in this particular story
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Anonymous07/03/16
This is the Kind of Romance...
I'm looking for, with two men who love each other without any jealousy and love me passionately. Hope someday I find them.
Very sensual
...and hot too.
A fine read.
Romance?
Still looking for the romance in this story. Believe this really belongs in group sex. You define the main character well. But Ben and jerry? Who are they? And just how are they "romancing" her? It's an OK read if your into group I guess. Reader needs to feel the emotion for romance to work, it's just not here in this particular story
This is the Kind of Romance...
I'm looking for, with two men who love each other without any jealousy and love me passionately. Hope someday I find them.
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