Anime Convention Harem Ch. 06

Thank You Again

More Please

Very well done!

I was at first quite skeptical about reading this, considering that most stories in this category are about total domination and/or humiliation, but I find myself pleasantly surprised with this story! Very well written, fully fleshed out characters with very life like and believable personalities. My only gripe is a little more detail with the characters, such as height weight, eye color, etc. Other than that, spectacular work sir! Keep the chapters coming!

more please

Again. The chapter was short and I was left wondering how she will hook up with brian

I hope you keep going.

The chapter feels short even though it's a decent leangth. Brian doesn't seam like the type to have sex on the first date, I wounder how the bunny will suduce him and how they will both cope with thiese sudden changes.

The build is almost too slow, very much enjoying your attention to detail. Perhaps start combining some of your chapters?

The story is not bad, but as this is an erotic story website, you should really mention before a story starts that there will be little or no sex in it for 6+ chapters.

Short But Sweet

Damn, short again. Please continue writing; as I am quite literally "cranking" these out as fast as possible. (I'm wincing internally at my bad pun.)

This is great! Why the low rating?

This series has real characters and a believable premise. I love it and can't understand why it's not H(ot).

And for those of you complaining the sex isn't happening yet, fuck off and write something better.

asianToy

Re: This is great! Why the low rating?

I'm actually surprised to get such a high rating on a slow build-up.

I think if I really put my mind to it and wrote a fast and dirty scenario I could land a higher score, but for now I gotta write what's satisfying to me. I started this project because I loved reading erotica, and somewhere in the back of my head I was always like, "Someday I'm gonna try writing my own."

Very well done

You're developing some really likable, intriguing characters, as well as one who is not so likable. Looking forward to your next installments

Write MORE!!!

Yes, I like this series. I am glad that you write so fast. Keep writing more. Thank you. Where does the harem part come in or the mind control?

wtf

this is a sex story sight.. not your parade thru the park. This is a place where people enjoy sex and how it is shown.. 6 chapters and not even a boob squeeze or a pussy rub.. are you gay or do you not know how to write this stuff?

Great story!

A surprisingly cute story and a fun read! I like the plot and character building. It does need to start moving past the angst at some point and come together with some continued story, but I'm enjoying the intro. *****

no sex? post this story elsewhere

Post sex damn it

Enjoying the build up

I like the story you're telling, so I don't mind that there's nothing hardcore yet, but I really hope you don't leave us all hanging.

Moree

Favorited! Longer chapters please!

Nice

Ignore the assholes yelling about no sex, some stories are good with the buildup!!!

Enjoyable character development

I look forward to more chapters, the tension and anticipation you are building is making this series one of the better reads in recent memory. Thank you!

Fuck you all just calling for sex straight away, this is why we can't have nice things. Who cares that guy 1 and gal 2 do whatever they do if you don't know anything about them? I'm loving this characterization, keep it up.

Seems like the way to make everyone happy would be to put a disclaimer at the beginning of each chapter letting the reader know there won't be any sex. Then those who are here to get off can move on and those who are here for story and buildup can continue to enjoy. Lots of authors on literotica do that and it's always appreciated when they show that kind of consideration for their readers. People might be less frustrated with the pace of the story if you warn them ahead of time so they can adjust expectations accordingly.

love this story

I think this is a great story line and hope to be able to read more of it soon. I am enjoying the slow build up and character development. The two things I would like to see is that if there is a short chapter that it might get grouped with another just to give more than a pagge to read, and I kinda want to get a little more of the story from Brian's point of view. But other than that it's great and again i can't wait to read more.

Stfu you idiots.

I swear you people commenting about the no sex are goddamn idiots. He stated that this is like a novel, it's not a smut story. Sex isn't the main point. This story, is focused more on story. If you complain about the lack of sex so far, go fuck yourself, this story has fantastic pace, I personally would even like it a bit slower. The characters are fantastic (mostly, fucking hate Chloe) and the writing itself is intuitive. I'll be eagerly awaiting new chapters, thanks for writing.

Nice

I have read the six chapters so far and I like it. I do have to agree that I would have liked a bit more sex so far. But it's fun to read.

Next part?

Any idea when the next chapter might be appearing?

good story, looking forward to next part

I have to agree that this is a good story, and the character development is great. Looking forward to reading more. Hope that the next part is posted soon!

read this elsewhere.

really good story. Great characters and all that. Unfortunatly this is exactly where the story stopped the last time i read it a year ago.

RE: read this elsewhere.

I finished chapter 6 here about forty-five days ago. I've been working on chapter 7 for even longer than that, and it's still not ready yet. I've been struggling to balance "charming", "sexy", and "realistic".

That said, it might not be finished very soon. I work full-time and work is hard. When I get home I'm typically too exhausted to do much besides eat, shower, and go to bed. I wish I could promise you all more, but that's the way it is. This project is not abandoned, nor are the next chapters imminent - it will continue at the slow crawl of a new chapter every couple of months as I work on it in my spare time.

For all of my readers, thank you for your kind words and patience. And to everyone who's been dissatisfied with the slow updates - trust me, no one's been waiting longer for these chapters than I have.

Amazing work!

You have done an amazing job writing this story and I sincerely hope that you continue and finish this story. The detail and actions of the characters is flawless, it flows well and feels real and alive. It also seems like Stephanie could use a foot massage after such a long day, maybe Brian could help. You've even given me some inspiration for my story I'm working on.......and working two jobs doesn't help so I feel your pain, so keep on writing.

So. Awesome.

I really hope you'll continue this in the future. The sexual tension is great, the mysterious token charming the girls is a great hook, and the characters are fun and compliment the story well. Keep it up!

Smell That Smell

LOL Old Song that fits Megans Body Odor and Hygiene to a "T" . Look's like Stephanie will be with Brian Sooner rather then Later. as for Chloe it would serve her right to find Brian with Another Woman. and see how her Feeling's go with Emily showing up with Rebecca he could have a Serious Harem going. and Chloe pulling her hair out trying to figure it out.

nooooooo

It has ended before it began please tell me you are still working on this engaging story

The chapters are still too short to stand on their own, combine two chapters at least per submission.
I agree with the previous poster the chloe should get what's coming to her and perhaps in the form of a beat down.. or whatever... I want to see her suffer for treating him so badly and for actually believing the feminist drivel that man are privileged and are the source of all the worlds problems because they have a penis.
I can't believe one of her friends hasn't slapped her in the face and told her how full of it she is and to grow up.