Siren's Song (err Body)

Damn

Just what we need here. A couple of cheating assholes who both deserve to get fucked over by their spouses in a divorce.

negative rating

I like almost all your stories, but...

I like almost all your stories, but this one I don't...Why? Because I could understand the very low probability to find "Trinity" (almost like winning lotery), could make him cheat the wife he say he loved and respected once...As for her she didn't show any regrets for almost get a divorce for her previous cheating, nor any remorse for what she could do to her children...But a constant cheating showed how these two are the tipical selfish cheaters and as so, soon they will commit a mistake and found themselves divorced...Do they think that they will be happy together? Never: they would never trust the other, because they knew each other as cheaters...1*

Apologies

Sorry to pick on you but I can't stand it anymore. The word is "discreet". The word "discrete" means individual or particular.

This is a porn site

It has porn on it. This is a porn story. It is in the correct category. It is well written though a little fast and sloppy.

I prefer a lot more drama in my stories and I essentially read it because it's imhapless. He is a good author. But it is a stroke story. Talking talking...sex scene...ZIP...ah...talking again. Guy meets girl. Guy fucks girl. Girl and Guy are married...to other people. Okay

I would have liked a bit of a creative spin on it, but it was boilerplate work.

Didn't like this one

I've enjoyed some of your stories in the past but this isn't one of them. Just couldn't like their cheating asses. I found it improbable that neither of their spouses would tumble to the fact that they were fucking like rabbits. I found it totally implausible that he would "bump" into Trinity at a business conference. I wanted one of their spouses to figure out that they were cheating and open up a big old can of whoop ass on them. With thoroughly unlikeable characters on one hand and really dumb ones on the other, there just wasn't anything to enjoy about this mess. Maybe next time.

Thanks for the effort.