Page Ch. 02

Ten Stars,,,

Ithink this is an awesome story and it must continue for at least 5 or 6 more chapters I would give this 10 stars if possible please continue it....

Too Short

Both of these chapters have been much too short. The level of detail is just about right, but it leaves me unfulfilled, or perhaps leaves me wanting more is more accurate. Love the characters and enjoyed the shopping trip to Kohls (really did). Glad you didn't do the dressing room thing. Curious to read what these mysterious secrets of her's are all about. Good job. 5.

Ludlum-esque but sexier

This story is turning into some crazy Ludlum-level stuff but with added sex an incrst to spice it all up. 5* and hopefully more chapters to come soon!

Really good story

Can't wait for the next chapter.

More

Yes please continue.

Super Story

You have me trapped , you must continue the story. 5 stars. Thanks

As always, a very good story.

It's looking now like there is much more to it and certainly much more to Page than Chapter 1left us expecting. Great work. Hope the wait times for coming chapterS are brief. Five stars.

Very good

Looking forward to the next chapter

Very good so far......

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God damn... The cliff hangers... Why at that point? :c

Good yarn.....!

Keeping me guessing and entertained. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Both chapters, so far, are...

Well written and presented. Keep it going,

GreatStoryline

I can't wait for the next installment!!

So hot!

What can I can say that hasn't already been posted..It's a wonderfully erotic story..I would agree it definitely left me wanting MORE :-)

A good read!

It's very refreshing to read a new story that you can't guess easily what the story line is going to be. I hope you are already working on others chapters of this story.

Loving the stories

You are a amazing writer! I hope you make this into a long series.

OH MY GOD!

This story you have written has such a cool start! Please continue this one until you finish it. Obviously the sex is really hot, but the storyline is way above that. Keep going.

Excellent

Loving this, no negative to it

It's getting better.

Page is playing WoW! I've been in that instance as a healer. Hope that isn't a spoiler for anyone. I really want to know where this is going. Can we have the next chapter soon, please?

It just got a lot better!

I knew you had it in You! *****+

Hurry up with next chapter.....

Chapter 3 is in the queue.

As with sex, so too is writting; these things are better unrushed.

More, More, More

Can't wait for the next chapter now that I'm setting on pins & needles waiting. Thanks

I don't know where this is going, but I'm enjoying the ride so far! Hopefully it will continue and not leave us hanging somewhere! :)
Write on!!

If we were reading a new, rather than a previously published story

I could see dribbling out the chapters as they are written. But since these are rewrites, why not combine 2 or 3 of them as a single submission?

The story Page

We aren't sure where rightbank's comment is headed, but this story has never been posted before and is the solely our creation We have been taking a break over the holidays and will be posting Ch. 4 shortly. The first three chapters were not dribbled out, they were published within a month's time.

Very good so far!

I hadn't seen this story until yesterday when I noticed that Chapter 5 had been posted so I started at the beginning. Your usual standard of excellence is right on track.

I have never read anything from you before

but it seems to have gotten more of a direction and I was amazed that you seem to take some suggestions. I'm not sure I would. I'll keep going and see where you take me.. hopefully gullible Scotty