All Comments on 'Just Being Neighbourly Pt. 02'

I was concerned this would end badly but loved the happy ending.

Wonderful story of how two people evolved into lust then love. After the car sex I guess that they realized that they need and love each other. Keep the store going and 5 stars as usual.

Liked it all the way until Charlie said she wanted to go to "makeout point". I wish the date could've just ended before that and they'd go straight home instead, but I get why you had to write it like that. Still though, not a fan of 'that' scene.

Liked the story though, and I like that the siblings at least both seemed to be completely non-relationship material emotionally. And now that they appear to be exclusive I'm eager to see the next chapter. Maybe a cameo from Belinda if only for Karen to bitch-slap her? :)

loved it. great story, well written. great ending. carry on writing !

well done keep on trucking tenbears43

Thank you for a great story.

I really didn't know how it was going to end.

It could have gone either way.

More about Dan & Karen please :-)

i love the "happy ending" quality to this storyline. Like all your other stories I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks

Great story, i am ao looking forward to the next chapter. Please please keep writing!

from one of my favorite authors. Just don't make us wait as long for the next chapter.

I really enjoy this and pretty much all your other stories. I have your submissions paged bookmarked and check it regularly for new chapters. Keep up the good work.

Waiting for the next chapter

very good

Fantastic story. Waiting for the next chapter.

Please, please. please continue Dan and Karen!

Wonderful, honest writing!

Outstanding! Keep it up, friend!

So very good, on to part 3...;) thank you!

Another great installment to your excellent story!

If you have feelings for someone, tell them or move on. And to double date and double cheat was not my cup of tea. But it is not my story.

The more the story went on, I thought for sure he had lost her. By the time the second date happened, I figured it was over. Especially after they both had sex with their dates. I was feeling bummed he didnt let his feelings known sooner. Great close on this excellent story

I loved it but some people might find it weird or icky for a brother and sister to fuck their respective dates in the same car at the same time.

How do you tell someone that the sun does not shine, the earth fail to turn, the breeze on your face turn to sleet and rain, gone if there is no connection, emotionally, spiritually and physically. You seem to capture these and others so well it is scary. I am an old softy I guess because the date and double date here seemed so wrong and painful. Expressions and communication between partners is essential and it was wrong to not take the chance to find out, even if it hurt for a while. You have to put yourself out and in a position of vulnerability. If you are willing then perhaps you may just survive and be stronger for it, even if you have to die a bit when you strike out. Great story again. Cheers from the snowbank.

The whole fucking other people in front of each other killed the mood of the story and then him and her getting sloppy seconds from each other later that night professing thier love. Bullshit. 2 stars

Great story and what an ending. 5 star so far.

Excellent story enjoyed the ending so much, great writing and building of the story. Thank you.

Karen just being a Karen!!

Just fucking skanks seems fidelity ain't an issue!! Trash

I am probably the worst victim of 'sunk cost fallacy'. Finished this one..... somehow, but won't be reading more.

About time Dan got his head out of his ass and confessed his love for Karen. Guess the double date/fuck was the catalyst that got him moving off dead center. Never had a big Lincoln to screw in but the bed of my truck was a lot of fun out under the stars. Nice that I can head on over to the third chapter without waiting for ages. Still enjoying the story.

What do they do for work,?no mention of jobs.Also with the amount of unprotected cock Karen is getting why isn't she pregnant?.

Ha, ha, ha!!!!! Who cares about jobs?????!!!!!

Their ONLY JOB NOW is to become to publicly loving couple that they deserve to be...and, again WHO CARES about the neighborhood gossips??!!

This is SSSOOO 👍 good...

Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌪️🌪️🌪️🌪️🌪️