This was pretty good -- what there was of it. I would like to see this extended into a real story rather than this outline, but I think you have got the talent to write it.
Thank you -- three stars.
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Anonymous11/20/15
held down and fucked
love the thought of being held down and fucked.
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Anonymous11/24/15
5 Stars! + this is why.
It is rare to find a story that leaves at a cliffhanger of not actually seeing/ meeting the Master/ Creator/ Powerful man involved. I loved the individuality of how this story was written- and done very well with her perspective and thoughts. The passion is there, the writing technique is strong, and I'm incredibly excited to meet her Master. To know how he treats her and how he will love her. I wish it was longer but it was a quick and detailed enough chapter to really be a "page turner." It was the 'pulling of the collar' part that really sucked me into the feeling. I hope to read more from you :) thank you!
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Welcome, new author!
This was pretty good -- what there was of it. I would like to see this extended into a real story rather than this outline, but I think you have got the talent to write it.
Thank you -- three stars.
held down and fucked
love the thought of being held down and fucked.
5 Stars! + this is why.
It is rare to find a story that leaves at a cliffhanger of not actually seeing/ meeting the Master/ Creator/ Powerful man involved. I loved the individuality of how this story was written- and done very well with her perspective and thoughts. The passion is there, the writing technique is strong, and I'm incredibly excited to meet her Master. To know how he treats her and how he will love her. I wish it was longer but it was a quick and detailed enough chapter to really be a "page turner." It was the 'pulling of the collar' part that really sucked me into the feeling. I hope to read more from you :) thank you!
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